Secrets and Lies drabble

Jun 11, 2012 16:52

Title: Reminiscing
Author: Aussie
Rated: T
Characters: Bates, Carson
Pairing: Carson/Hughes, Bates/Anna
(300) word ficlet for the 'secrets and lies' prompt. Pretty much just the secret part though, because this is trufax! :)

at the Grantham Arms )

challenge 15: secrets and lies, character: charles carson, author: bsg_aussiegirl, character: john bates

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ellie987 June 11 2012, 11:00:56 UTC
*cries* This is so terribly sad! Poor Charles! Elsie's dead and he doesn't remember, he just remembers the good times. :( I wanna cuddle him now. As for Bates, I so adore him for letting Charles think everything's alright. Such a kind soul.

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bsg_aussiegirl June 11 2012, 11:16:41 UTC
I know! I was trying to think of a way for Carson to just let out his and Elsie's 'secret', and I figured that he would never let things slip unless he had mild dementia! Poor thing! At least we can be rest assured that Bates and the rest of the family are looking after him. :)

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ellie987 June 11 2012, 11:23:08 UTC
Still it's so sad to think of him without Elsie. :( I choose to believe her ghostly self is always around him, keeping him company and reminding him to turn on the light not to strain his eyes when reading.

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bsg_aussiegirl June 11 2012, 11:34:31 UTC
Hee. I'm sure she is. As they say in bsg fandom, she's head!Elsie. ♥

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crazymaryt June 11 2012, 11:56:59 UTC
This was so tragically beautiful and I totally am down with the idea of a headElsie. That's the best thing I've heard all day.

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bsg_aussiegirl June 11 2012, 12:25:30 UTC
Thanks, hon.

I'm thinking she'd be rather bossy too, head!Elsie! LOL

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crazymaryt June 11 2012, 12:40:36 UTC
She'd better be bossy or it wouldn't be the Elsie we know and love.

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bsg_aussiegirl June 11 2012, 12:57:47 UTC
Oh yes, but I see her being much much worse if she knew no one but Charles could hear her!

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redrockcan June 11 2012, 11:59:47 UTC
Sniff!! Poor Charles and Elsie!! This is so sad!! I agree, him being mad is the only way he'd discuss their relationship with anyone. But still, sniff, sad!!

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bsg_aussiegirl June 11 2012, 12:28:42 UTC
Happy you're sniffing! You made me sniff the other day, so now I'm just getting some of my own back! :)

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akachankami June 11 2012, 13:15:50 UTC
;_; what? what is it? ;_; *cries* no, i'm not crying it's just rain ;_; *cries harder* this is not true!! *rolls on the floor*
i was smiling like a cheeshire cat till The housekeeper had passed away three years ago, before the first of Mr Carson’s mild strokes ;_;
my dear mr carson *hugs charles* don't worry, no one's ever gonna take away your head elsie ;_; i'm so happy you still have those memories ;_; *cries still* at least you can trust mr bates and anna with your precious secret ♥

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bsg_aussiegirl June 11 2012, 22:27:15 UTC
Where's teddy!?!? Hang on to him!

And yes, the memories are all good! I'm not going into dark queen territory just yet. :)

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nixmom June 11 2012, 17:23:42 UTC
Damn you and your heart stabbiness!!! Elsie gone, Mr. Carson suffering dementia. And him letting the little secret slip. And Mr. Bates just kindly listening is very sweet. It refelcts the respect they all have for him so nicely. *sniffle*

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bsg_aussiegirl June 11 2012, 22:36:49 UTC
Yes, it's probably best you didn't read this before going to bed after all.

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