unconditionally onew
unconditionally onew
onew/key
pg
a/n. for applesu, the key to my onew ♥ also, first shinee fic, omg. D: feel free to let me know what you think of characterization (or anything, really). it really helps a first-timer! :))
( unconditionally onew )
onew/key
pg
a/n. for applesu, the key to my onew ♥ also, first shinee fic, omg. D: feel free to let me know what you think of characterization (or anything, really). it really helps a first-timer! :))
( unconditionally onew )
And I love the small details you include, like Kibum waggling his fingers to say hello, because HE WOULD TOTALLY DO THAT. And, of course, Onew tripping over everything in sight. The boy is SO AWKWARD, I LOVE IT. Alskjdflsdf the watering hole metaphor is so apt, Bling the OBNOXIOUS ELEPHANT. Onkey are perfect here, Onew is all sorts of spazzing fail and confused by everything and Key is completely unwilling to say how he actually feels and is snarky and confident but vulnerable at the same time. ♥
Despite what the outside world thinks, Jinki's not... well, dumb or anything. Though, he does have to admit, he has more than a few slip-ups on a daily basis and they're not that far between each other.
Cries, this is totally how Onew would justify his behavior to himself.
Minho shrugs, pushing Jinki forward. "I figure, if two people like each other, it really shouldn't matter if they're both boys or both girls." After a moment, he adds, "I wouldn't go broadcasting it to the world, though."
I think you wrote Minho perfectly here, quiet and observant and thoughtful and sweet, and I bet he totally does steer Onew away from potential obstacles. :|
Minho's buried under his blankets like some kind of Minho-lump
I giggled really hard, idek why. ;_;
Feeling awkward, he continues, "I was um, I was thinking of watching a movie, if you want to join me. I mean, it's cool if you don't, you seem down about something right now, but I just thought I'd offer." He takes a deep breath as Kibum glances over, looking bemused. "Anyway. Yeah," he finishes with absolutely no flourish at all.
SO AWKWARD. ♥
Because yeah, you kind of got teeth-happy towards the end there.
Cries forever, Onew is teeth-happy. T___T
"Er, no, I meant did it hurt when you fell out of heaven."
Onew spouting lame pick up lines ftw.
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