kama

Jan 11, 2009 12:36

kama
yoochun/changmin
nc-17
a/n. for applesu, who wanted yoomin rimming fic. so it should really go without saying that if that's not your cup of tea, don't read. but i just said it anyway, so whatever. :| also the title is taken from kama sutra, yes. kama means aesthetic and erotic pleasure. also i blanked, okay.

kama )

fandom: dbsk, pairing: yoochun/changmin

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applesu January 11 2009, 19:06:55 UTC
kshdajkf AHAHAHA YASSSS♥

CRIES changmin is so blunt skdjhfskj weeping i love him. and yoochun. YOOCHUN. WITH THE DIARY. SOBBING. i bet it is pink and girly. :| (lmfao junsu has a copy of the kama sutra. boy is bendy, yo :|) THE SEXING. CHANGMIN IS A SLAG!! semen + leather = not fun for yoochun to clean up. 8DDD YOOCHUN IS SO SKILLED WITH THE SEXIN'.

brb incoherent. if you couldn't tell. :| ilusfm♥

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xiahtic January 11 2009, 19:09:07 UTC
dlkhgk dhfgjkl;hdfgh cryingggg you ninja lmfao ♥♥ and yes omg junsu with that book. i die just thinking about it. sjdkhfksjd

SO DO I GET YUNJAE RIMMING NOW :D?

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applesu January 11 2009, 19:10:22 UTC
i lurk in the shadows of lj like a... ninja? D: ksdjfhjs this calls for a yoosu porn series based on the kama sutra. :| you should write it.

I GUESS YOU DO. 8D

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xiahtic January 11 2009, 19:13:43 UTC
............. SOBS DID YOU SEE HOW LONG THIS TURNED OUT TO BE. IF I DID A SERIES, I WOULD PROBABLY DIE. also i don't know any of the kama sutra positions...

HAHA :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDv i win.

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yeoboseyo January 11 2009, 19:07:47 UTC
I think your yoomin is seriously always some of the best I've ever read. I don't know. You capture them perfectly, I think. Funny how I say that in a sex fic, but it's TRUE. Okay, moving on.

Yoochun chokes on something - Changmin's pretty sure it's just his own spit.
I JUST DID THAT. RIGHT AT THE SAME SPOT. Except, it was juice.

Yoochun shakes his head, smiling. "When did you get greasier than me, Changminah?"

"I'm not greasy," Changmin says, pushing Yoochun towards the sofa. "I just have a healthy appetite. Growing boy, you know."
CRYING CRYING. dofiaoisdj

Changmin turns slightly to catch Yoochun's hand slipping out from beneath a cushion with a bottle of lube. Changmin laughs, burying his face into the crook of his elbow. "Fucking boy scout," [...]Okay. Right before this, I thought, "Sure, maybe now I could take a drink of my juice." CLEARLY, I WAS MISTAKEN ( ... )

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xiahtic January 11 2009, 19:11:16 UTC
djshf kjksjh jkdfghkajdhg cries forever and ever oh you ♥♥♥

B-BUT I TOTALLY COPPED OUT ON THE ENDING T_T LIKE. I DO NOT DENY COPPING-OUT OF. the porn took a lot out of me :((

jsdkgh your comment makes me a happy bunny ♥♥ still dying over the porno bit.. sdj

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yeoboseyo January 11 2009, 19:13:02 UTC
IT'S OKAY THAT YOU COPPED OUT. You see, most readers are also tired after the porn bit, so it fits. They're spent, we're spent, you were spent. It works. Trust me, ok? ok. ;_; ♥

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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xiahtic January 11 2009, 19:14:22 UTC
jfkghjkdh gd;ahfgl;jkhdfjklh dfg CRYING spent ohgod lmfaoooooo sdjkfh NEVER LEAVE ME OKAY <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

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yuxo January 11 2009, 19:10:15 UTC
...what are you doing to me. :l

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xiahtic January 11 2009, 19:12:25 UTC
jksdf crying well. ijdk. :(( does this have anything to do with the ninja homin i snuck in there..

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yuxo January 11 2009, 19:17:56 UTC
it's like trying to force my eyes to look in opposite directions at the same time. the chameleon thing or something. except there's a large neon YOOMIN SDFLKJSDFLKFLKJWESDLFJSLDKFJSDLKFJSLDKJSDFKJ RIMMING SDLKFLSKDFLKSDFLKJLDFKDSFJSFDLJSF FUCKING ON A LEATHER SOFA SDLKFJSDKFJLSDKJFSJFD sign blinding me no matter where i look.

fucking weeping and laughing at the same time i don't even know what to say to you. there are. no. words.

....>:l

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xiahtic January 11 2009, 19:24:47 UTC
skjgd sdhk gkajsdhgjkasdhfgk dying so fucking hard yuxi, idek. sdjkf I ACTUALLY USED TO HATE RIMMING but rping yoochun changed my mind T_T

:DDDD♥??????

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halcyon_morn January 11 2009, 19:17:17 UTC
Ok, I'm really sort of hugely excited about this, because there is never rimming in fics-which, ok, I get, because as you say it's not everyone's cup of tea, but it's something people (no small amount of them gay men) do and I've always wondered if there's some sort of unspoken slash code where everyone just pretends it doesn't exist-but before I actually read the fic I just wanted to say that kama (usually preceded by the honorific 'o') is also Japanese slang for "fag" or "queen," and that made me LOL a little bit.

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xiahtic January 11 2009, 19:26:47 UTC
sjkd dying chris, just dying ♥ i actually used to hate rimming :(( but i'm slowly, slowly warming up to it, obviously..

also i have no idea if my rimming does the actual deed any justice since this is the first time i've written it properly, outside of rp sdjkfh

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halcyon_morn January 11 2009, 19:33:33 UTC
In my experience (wow, am I really about to say this? D:) it's not quite so much of a penetrative, tongue-fucking thing, but the gasping and writhing part was right on, and that, to me, is the important part. :D

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xiahtic January 11 2009, 19:47:50 UTC
WELL. at least now i know, should i ever feel inclined to include rimming with my future porn XDD thank you for the heads-up, dies. djksf

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xiahtic January 11 2009, 19:30:43 UTC
sdkjf dies, maybe? it usually takes me a bit to write porn, since it gets so epic, as you can see XDD; ♥♥!!! thanks for reading and commenting~~~ :DDDD

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