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Transitions: Chapter 5

Dec 02, 2006 03:34

It took a while, but here it is. Thanks for your patience. Enjoy!

Title: Transitions
Author: Serenetwinkle
Chapter: 5 of (?…?)
Rating: PG- more bad words
Word count: 7,390
Pairing: Doumeki/Watanuki
Status: Incomplete
Summary: A switching of the strangest kind gives Watanuki and Doumeki a glimpse of something more.

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Comments 63

mangust December 2 2006, 11:38:04 UTC

My eyes can't believe what it see....Going read at FFnet, it's more convenient. *skipping merrily*

serenetwinkle December 3 2006, 05:21:02 UTC

^_^ Silly goose.

mangust December 2 2006, 12:39:45 UTC

Some wonders to myself
1) Doumeki is so rude not to offer Watanuki a dinner?
2) Very polite Wata calls a stranger without -san?
3) Considering Wata lives in the same rent-house as Hideki from CHobits...poor guys, such a small nest for lovy-doves =)

I liked the watch with big red numbers...details are everything to the story.

One with the same name and face, sure, but different all the same. Just look who he had chosen to room with LOL!

Well, it was worth waiting at least =) Every new chapter becomes better and better.

serenetwinkle December 3 2006, 05:30:54 UTC

1) LoL Yeah, he was kind of cranky huh? I guess he figured Watanuki already ate since he was at the restaurant. (Trust me, even if he didn’t tell Doumeki that's where he was, you can tell just by the smell. XD)

2) Mm-hmm. Sounds odd huh? But the way I sorted it out was that Kimihiro calls Doumeki 'Doumeki-san' because, yes, he is polite, but also because he wants to distance him and separate him from the Shizuka he loves. Watanuki had no such hold ups and thusly refers to Shizuka as 'Doumeki' because he doesn't really feel the need for that kind of distance. (Does this make any sense? ^_^;;)

3) Yeah, but if Hideki and Chii could manage, I figure it wouldn't be impossible for the two boys. Nice and cozy.

I like details too (obviously), I think they make it easier to visualize the scene as you are reading.

Thanks so very much. I glad the long wait didn't disappoint.

mangust December 3 2006, 11:08:42 UTC

2) I get it as Watanuki comforts himself with "Doumeki" thing, half-pretending he is the same one. It's just weeell, he is really polite boy (not as polite as MKR Fuu, but anyway), he could be confused once at least (as he did with asking for staing)
3) I though you defence yourelf this way =)

That aside, keep on serving thoughtful and moody Watanuki. I'm tired of one-sided "loud idiot" from all these fanfics...even CLAMP themself exaggerate this theme comparably little. (I'm a fan of "sakura park Watanuki" ^_^')

BTW, I know what I ask in exchange for the Doumeki already *wide evil green*
Considering the outfit, maybe you reconsidre it? I've just came with an image of that black Tsubasa outfit from 136th chapter...you know, THE chain =)))) Or should I live it for double portret? (Watanuki the pappetter, tee hee)

serenetwinkle December 5 2006, 22:55:54 UTC

2) Yeah, but he probably thinks it would be rude to go back to the more formal -san now that he has already been calling Shizuka 'Doumeki ' for a bit now. Plus, he is a creature of habit, so he gets into a routine rather easily.

3) Ohohoho ^_^

I love the sweeter, calmer and less one sided Watanuki also. It gives his character depth when all sides of his personality are brought to the surface, I think.

(Yes, yes you are evil.)

Ch-chained Doumeki... *nosebleeds and faints*

Watanuki as puppeteer... *twitches on floor*

Please to be having the chains on the boys yes. *has lost coherent speech* XD I leave them in your capable hands.

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almne December 2 2006, 12:55:14 UTC

I'm so happy to see this story updated. I loved the part where Watanuki had hysterics over the fact that the powers of the Doumeki and Watanuki of this world are flipped. Keep up the good work!

serenetwinkle December 3 2006, 05:33:11 UTC

Well, I'm happy you're happy.

XD

I liked that part too. When I got to that section there really wasn't any other reaction I could think of for him. What would Watanuki do if Doumeki was stuck as a spirit magnet? Laugh his ass off, that's what.

Thanks!

rusalkaz December 2 2006, 13:12:02 UTC

OMG... Haruka-san! XDDDD *fangirls* Wonderful, wonderful chapter! So many discoveries... *_* Watanuki laughing came as quite a relief after all that angst (beloved!angst if I may add xD) *huggles the poor dear* Great job, dear! :D *waits patiently for more* XD

serenetwinkle December 3 2006, 05:37:24 UTC

I know, I know! *squees* Since I got full reign over what was what in this world, I thought what a perfect opportunityfor Watanuki to meet Haruka-san in person! Glad you like the discoveries; I worried I might have been tossing out too much at once. ^_^

You angst mongrel. XD I have something you might like coming up in a while. It's right up your alley I think. :-D

*huggles back* As ever, thanks for the lovely comments.

rusalkaz December 3 2006, 10:58:36 UTC

Ahahaha Yeah, angst whore - that's me all right XD *huggles*

I thought what a perfect opportunityfor Watanuki to meet Haruka-san in person!
Girl, I totally worship you for that! XDD Haruka-san!<3333333 :D

reppu December 2 2006, 14:38:55 UTC

I'm really enjoying this story! I went through today and read all the chapters, but it's really interesting, using the parallel of traveling dimensions like they do in Tsubasa, and combining it with the general storyline of XXXHolic. I'm quite looking forward to the next chapter!

serenetwinkle December 3 2006, 05:42:08 UTC

Yeah! I'm happy you enjoyed it! ^///^ Sorry, I put the links to other chapters up late, so you probably had to search for them. I'll try to get better about that stuff.

The dimension traveling was just too good a plot device to leave alone. Had to use it. :-)

I'll see you in the next chapter then, and thanks so much.