Fanfic: Rice

[celestial_spare]

Title: Rice (Part 1 of 3)
Pairing: Doumeki x Watanuki FOREVER~!
Rating: PG
Summary: Watanuki, Doumeki, and bits of food sticking to oh-so-convenient places.
Warnings: Unbeta'ed. Short... No spoilers that I can think of, as yet. Next update will be this weekend.
Disclaimer: xxxHolic and its characters belongs to CLAMP.

Comments

[konnie_chan]

Doumeki strikes me as an eight year old with a crush. You know, when you punched the boy you liked and called him names, because you liked him? That's Doumeki. I pitty Watanuki... He is wise beyond his years, and oh so polite and considerate, but I figure he just doesn't know how to act around an overgrown eight year old with a crush on him. Still, that's just how I like Doumeki. Nice fic, with the food fetish and naughty tongue action. Hugs"

[celestial_spare]

And of course Doumeki wouldn't let even so much as a single grain of rice of Watanuki's lunches go to waste, right?

Of course he won't. ;D Well, I'd have to say that I don't really see Doumeki as immature -- he loves and wants to protect Watanuki, we all know that, and I agree, he knows what he wants, and acts upon it. Wata-chan on the other hand... DENIAL. Bwahaha.

Which just makes them oh-so-fun to write.

Till the next chap!

[ynm]

Yay! There's two more parts!!

Eeto...I would have to agree with both comments above. Doumeki does act a little like an 8 year old boy who pulls on the pigtails of the girl he likes to get her attention.

As for Watanuki...I'm not sure what his denial resembles, except that it's pretty common in ukes. It's probably some sort of personality disorder all ukes suffer from...

But in your fic, Doumeki is a person who knows what he wants and how to get it. Sneaky!! Which is him too. ^_^

[celestial_spare]

The second part is actually done, although I'd need the weekend to catch the time to upload it.

The third part... I'm not sure whether to end it with more fluffiness or... *gasp* a lemon. Ack... although it's 80% going for a sweet fluffy ending. The lemon will have to wait... *evil chuckle*

Yes, Doumeki is one sneaky shrine boy -- but don't we all love him for it?

[rusalkaz]

Kids... *looool* There's no other pairing in any other fandom that I find equally amusing as our dearest Doumeki & Watanuki. Both are so immature about each other XDDD
Lovely story ^_~ Little actions speak so much... XD

[celestial_spare]

It's the little things that matter... *bonks the pair's heads together*

Thanks for the comment!

[sozuki17]

Hahaha! >D
This was great! I can't wait to read the next chapter! When Watanuki was trying to direct Doumeki to the rice sounded like me me trying to help my blind friend what she dropped on the floor.
"Back...no, wait! Foward! STOP! Okay...to the right...no! Left! You past it!"
I suck at giving directions though. XDD

[celestial_spare]

And, apparently, Watanuki sucks at it as well. That, or Doumeki is as directionally-impaired as Zaraki Kenpachi / Yachiru from Bleach. ^_^ Nyehehe...

Accidentally on purpose. ;D

[whiterabbit1613]

That was thoroughly adorable. But then again, I have a thing for 'there's something on your chin/cheek/lips let me help you wipe it off' exchanges, because there's so much possibility for lovey-ness! Looking forward to the rest!

[celestial_spare]

Yes, the possibilities are absolutely squee~!-worthy. Will upload the second installment by Sunday!