Transitions: Chapter 3

Sep 27, 2006 00:47

I have no excuse for the length other than I just don't know when to shut the heck up. I'm so sorry. ^_^;;

Title: Transitions
Author: Serenetwinkle
Chapter: 3 of (uh...)
Rating: PG- Watanuki, you potty mouth
Word count: 5,293 (sorryPairing: Doumeki/Watanuki ( Read more... )

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damec September 27 2006, 05:18:21 UTC
I love this fic, please update again soon.

on a side note one of my best friends has a total of 47 piercings. 38 of them visible on her face and ears. ^_^

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serenetwinkle September 27 2006, 23:37:16 UTC
@_@ 47 piercings...

And I though my Yuuko was brave.

She, btw, has a total of 39. I'll leave where the rest are to your imagination. Cause Watanuki is not going to find out. :-D

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seizansha September 27 2006, 05:22:06 UTC
*jaw dropping* this is so amazing, like you had just kept going with chapter 1 and 2's a seperate story!(i know how hard it is when you're switching between times/demensions)

really love the changes in the rest of the world. shizuka's reactions, the anger and the shame... love the shaking and that the tears were what snapped him out of it. yuko with all the piercings... sounds odd, but then it does fit her personality. curious as to why kimi-chan is working for her, just a job or something more...

*giggles and whispers* i gotta be first!

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serenetwinkle September 27 2006, 23:44:57 UTC
Heh, thanks. ^\\\^

It is hard! The first switch wasn't so bad, but once I got into Doumeki-mode, it was really hard to switch back to spazWatanuki-mode. Their personalities are just too different, so I hope I didn't mess it up too bad. LoL

Why Kimi-chan is working for her will be revealed later. ^_~ And I'm glad you like all the little nuances. Makes me happy when people notice the small stuff. XD

*almost first, these guys are quick*

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seizansha September 29 2006, 03:13:06 UTC
*sigh* i know, but that's what happens when you've got so much to praise!

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sozuki17 September 27 2006, 05:32:10 UTC
Ah! Poor Watanuki!

This does finally have the thing that kept popping in my head everytime someone said, "This is not my Watanuki/Kimihiri". And what was, "Yuuko should know what's going on, right? Let's go visit Yuuko!" XDD

I'm so happy this was updated again! I can't wait for the next chapter!

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serenetwinkle September 27 2006, 23:47:42 UTC
I agree! Poor Watanuki... He's not even two chapters into his story and already he's ready for a mental breakdown.

Tee hee.

Still one Yuuko left to go, maybe she will be of more help, hmm? (Like I don't know already)

^_^

Thanks!

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sparda219 September 27 2006, 06:20:26 UTC
NEVER APOLOGISE FOR A CHAPTER BEING LONG AGAIN.

It could be 10000 words long and I would be happier for it.

This story is delicious! I want more! MORE!

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serenetwinkle September 27 2006, 23:49:21 UTC
I... I'm so sorry! ^_^;;

I shall never apologize for the length again.

I'm glad you found it yummy. More will come soon, so hang tight.

:-)

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rusalkaz September 27 2006, 09:51:54 UTC
omg... Poor Watanuki (and Doumeki!)... ;_; Absolutely amazing chapter! *_* It doesn't feel long at all, it was over before I even noticed it (I was so into what was happening ^_~). And gods I want more XDDD Please please please *puppy eyes* XD
Cheers for using Ran and Gingetsu from Clover! XDDDD That felt so nostalgic ^_~

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serenetwinkle September 27 2006, 23:57:44 UTC
Thank you! I'm happy that you like it so much. I promise you will get more soon, so put those puppy eyes away!

Can't... resist... puppy eyes...

>.<

Yea! You knew who they were! I've always loved those two... hehe.

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