I come bearing a oneshot!!

[scariekitten]

This is my Doumeki/Watanuki oneshot #1!! Please review--

TITLE-- Chains
Pairing-- eh...Pg- to Pg 13 for obsessions
disclaimer-- I'll borrow it from CLAMP and bring them back a Doumeki with personality and a Watanuki in denial.
Warnings/Spoilers-- no spoilers, pure fluff and 104 (what else is there?)

When Doumeki came home, everyday, he didn’t go

Comments

[serenetwinkle]

@_@

That's about as AU as it gets.

eh heh heh

But it was very well written! Even if the mind does boggle at the thought of Doumeki sitting in a room full of naked people and pagan gods...

It might just be me, but I didn't feel this was much of a fluff piece. It seemed to have a more angsty feel to it, probably because it was centered around Doumeki's introspection and musings.

If Watanuki only knew who needed who most, maybe things would change.

I don't know why, but this was one of my favorite lines. I just really liked it.

Great job! I hope to see more stuff from you soon.

[scariekitten]

thank you!

[canon_4_life]

Wow, another Doumeki-centric story, i loved it XD

I think it's so hard to draw Doumeki's characterization, because he's emotionless guy, physically. But the way he acted you know he cared for Watanuki.

I hope they are so canon! XD

[scariekitten]

how can they not be? Thank you!

[animefreak42]

Hmm, that's a very interesting interpretation of Doumeki's character. This was rather angsty piece, but it really fit the story idea. I really liked it, and hope you write more. In response to serenetwinkle's comment, I actually don't think it was AU, just an interpretation of canon. Great job, I look forward to reading more from you.

[scariekitten]

thanks! I have a Maru/Moro story in the making, but i'm not sure where I will post it...hmmm....