Supernatural fic: Up the Stairs [Gen, allusions to het, PG-13]

[dotfic]

Title: Up the Stairs
Author: dotfic
Rating: Gen, allusions to het, PG-13
Word count: ~2,000
Timeframe: set during "Home"
Disclaimer: None of them belong to me. They are the property of Eric "I have a plan, no really" Kripke and the CW.

Thank you to offbalance for the beta read. Beta readers are love.

A/N: Written for the 2006 spn_gleeweek Request Fest: #17 I'd like a tag

Comments

[deirdre_c]

Oh, this is terrific, hon! Tender and melancholy and lovely. Mary as brave and sure when hunting ghosts as her boys are. ♥

[dotfic]

*hugs* Aw, thank you. I'm glad Mary vs. the ghost came across so well. That ghost was going down, no question. *g*

[dawnydiesel]

He needs a haircut, and there's too much sadness in him, neither of which she can fix.

She notes the two tiny scars along his jaw, four on the back of his hand, two at his temple, and one at the base of his neck that just peeks out beneath the frayed collar of his brown jacket. She's certain there are more, larger ones, out of sight under his clothes.

Those two/three lines are EXACTLY what I wanted. Those are exactly what a mother would see, something that not everyone else would.

The last line? VERY effective.

Excellent job. Thank you so much.

[dotfic]

Hi! I'm very pleased this was what you were hoping for, and you think I did right by Mary.

You're welcome! Thanks for the plot bunny. :)

[staceey]

Wow. That was brillant!

[dotfic]

*blushes* Thank you! :D

[sdl_uncommon]

That was amazing. Actually made me fall in love with the character. That is just how she should be. ♥ Thank you.

[dotfic]

Wow, that's a lovely to hear, thank you. :)

[cutedevil666]

Wow that was amazing. So much in her thoughts. Love it.

[dotfic]

Thanks! I'm glad you think I captured her voice right.