SPN Fic: Never Travelled (Dean/Castiel, R)

Nov 22, 2008 19:02

Title: Never Travelled
Author: dotfic
Rating: slash, Dean/Castiel, hard R
Spoilers: for 4x10
W/C: 1,900
Disclaimer: No, they don't belong to me. I'm doing what I like with them anyway.

a/n: Many thanks to smilla02 for the beta-reading and enabling encouragement, and for helping me with the title (from ee cummings). Set at some point after 4x10.

Dean feels like he's waiting to be graded or some bullshit like that, judged and assessed and what does Castiel know about kissing anyway? Zero. Zip. Zilch. )

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angi_is_altered November 23 2008, 00:20:32 UTC
0_o

WOW!

THAT WAS HOT!

It was GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!

Can I have more please??

*saving*

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dotfic November 23 2008, 22:20:30 UTC
Whee, thank you so much!

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tigriswolf November 23 2008, 00:22:19 UTC
This is completely WONDERFUL. *loveloveLOVES*

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dotfic November 23 2008, 22:21:06 UTC
I'm so pleased you liked this! \o/

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brigid_tanner November 23 2008, 00:25:56 UTC
Damn, that's wonderful. Love Dean's worry about the holy tax accountant, that maybe this is a bad thing for Castiel. Many great lines, but here's a few i especially liked:
Castiel licks his lips thoughtfully, like someone who's just tried a flavor of ice cream for the first time.

It was easier to carry the weight when you knew how much it was.

He slides his tongue over the chapped roughness of Castiel's lower lip, makes a mental note to tell him about Chapstick.

Yeah, Dean feels no guilt at all undoing an angel, the smug son of a bitch.

He remembers the way the hilt of the knife felt in his palm as the blade dug into flesh. It's not as if Sam killed the body Ruby took. It's not as if this is all right, and Dean almost pushes Cas away, but instead, he holds on, needs to hold on, needs this.

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dotfic November 23 2008, 22:23:26 UTC
Thank you, I do enjoy writing them all conflicted and longing. *g* And so much the better if Dean shows a moment of concern. Poor Dean, for a minute there he thought he broke the angel. Hee.

So glad you liked this!

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innie_darling November 23 2008, 00:26:19 UTC
The last two lines are so sharp. And I like that everything is out in the open - that the vessel is dead by Dean's hand, that Castiel could conceivably be punished, everything.

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dotfic November 23 2008, 22:25:03 UTC
*hugs* I'm so pleased you liked this! Every way I turn with them, there's an obstacle, and I think half the fun was putting it all on the table and having them struggle with it. And all the reasons they both want this so much.

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big_heart_june November 23 2008, 00:34:39 UTC
Dean closes his fingers over Castiel's, guiding him, murmurs yes, there, like that,

Oh yes, this was so hot as were so many other lines...you write beautifully, I love your little humourous touches here and there too. I LOL at Dean's line about chapstick! Dean's thoughts were awesome.

I was sad to see 'end' and not tbc..

Thank you for sharing, this was gorgeous ♥

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dotfic November 23 2008, 22:27:18 UTC
\o/ Thanks so much! I think Dean would be more than happy to educate Castiel in that area. I like playing with the idea that Castiel has all this cosmic wisdom, he's ancient and yet there's a lot Dean can teach him, not even just sex, but human feeling and a sense of humor, all of it.

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