This is really cool, the au works really well and I love all of the details - Marcelo's hair, Pepe's Mum etc. I thought the relationships were awesome, the friendship, Cris and his Mum and of course Cris and Kaka-I'm a big fan of the pairing and I think you really showed how it could work, ur characterisations were great. Kaka makes such a good Priest and I love the ending-his explanation of his faith/crisis of faith and the issues that relate to that was perfect. and Cris was also lovely, I can totally see him with this power. and the whole idea of relationships and power and attraction-is totally relevant right now-valentines day week. So I'm not sure if this clear enough but I really love it, so much so that I'm pretty sure I'll read it again tomoro, their relationship was lovely, I think you did a really good job of keeping the characters believable within the au, and it was a great au. and the last scene was just the best. Its way too late here so hope this makes sense-summary = thank you for posting this awesome story I really enjoyed it
augh, I'm so so so glad you liked it. and omg I didn't even think of the Valentine's connection -- after my failed attempts to finish it by halloween and then by xmas, this is a holiday fic after all!!
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tee hee ricky you're my valentine.
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