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southerngaelic February 4 2011, 21:21:04 UTC
This was brilliant :D

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timberwolfoz February 4 2011, 22:07:51 UTC
D'awww!

The 'getting married or pretending to be in a relationship for a case' may be a cliche, but it's a good one (and hey, ACD!Holmes was briefly engaged just for that reason). Plus, their behaviour and their relationship was entirely plausible throughout, from John being all 'wait, what?' to Sherlock being his normal infuriating self, to the easy way they fell into a marital relationship. And the proposal scene was a hoot!

Bonus points for Top!John. Rowr. *applauds*

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insaneboingo February 4 2011, 22:23:28 UTC
This is brilliance! I absolutely adore this story. You have both of their characterizations and their dialog down perfectly.

So, so good. Fluffy, adorable, hilarious, sweet and so well written. Instant rec.

♥♥♥

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x_ray_sherlock February 4 2011, 22:29:43 UTC
Awesome, lovely story, especially John.
Just the description of Sherlock talking to John
possibly learning-disabled child. I just find it
sad that people still equate us as dense/stupid.

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_doodle February 4 2011, 23:10:17 UTC

I just want to say, I'm sorry John's thoughts offended you, but please remember that just because a character thinks/says something it does not mean it reflects the authors thoughts/opinions in real life.

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x_ray_sherlock February 4 2011, 23:35:22 UTC

No need to be sorry, I really enjoyed your story
truly. No offense taken, Sherlock thinks everyone is boring and a bit slow...except John. I just think the term LD is so outdated, it was coined in 63'. I hope I didn't upset you, not my intention.

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innie_darling February 4 2011, 22:54:20 UTC
I enjoyed this again, and I like the changes, particularly the scene where Harry "interrupts" them.

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