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donutsweeper

Charming the Pants off the Pashahads

Oct 31, 2007 06:58

Title: Charming the Pants off the Pashahads (Part One)
Pairing/Rating/Warning: none, rated PG, contains spoilers for SGA through S2
Word Count: 11878 total (Part One 6404)
Betas: The wonderful jadesfire2808 and _medley_
Summary: Colonel Sheppard's team gets into hot water off world when he accidently insults a village chieftain's daughter. Can their new teammate, Captain ( Read more... )

torchwood, crossover, jack, stargate atlantis, fic

Comments 15

jadesfire October 31 2007, 12:09:22 UTC

Haven't read the shiny new version yet, but just had to say how much I loved the title. I'm making highly undignified choking noises here, so that the readers don't hear me, because that's just inspired

*helpless giggling*

Wonderful - back to read later!

donutsweeper October 31 2007, 12:24:44 UTC

*big grin* errr...sorry for it being too funny a title!!!

rustydog October 31 2007, 12:42:56 UTC

Hee. I have a similar comment - can't read it yet, work and all, but I love the quote you used for the cut tag.

Also OMG you wrote a reeeeally long fic!

donutsweeper October 31 2007, 12:52:38 UTC

scary long, nearly twice as long as anything I'd written before. Glad you like the quote!

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donutsweeper October 31 2007, 17:52:21 UTC

*bounces* Thank you!

rustydog November 1 2007, 17:35:10 UTC

Boy am I enjoying this! You've done all the voices so well. And I've kind of forgotten I'm reading a story, I just want to see what happens.

I love that Jack slipped some coins back into his pocket so they wouldn't be noticed. Poor Jack, he does have to be really careful what he tells to whom, when. His whole life is a patchwork of choices about how much to reveal.

donutsweeper November 1 2007, 17:40:12 UTC

That is the ultimate compliment! Thanks! *blushes*

I liked the bit about the coins too, was he hiding them to keep secret just when he was from, or for another reason?

His whole life is a patchwork of choices about how much to reveal.

very, very true, and it's what makes him so interesting to me!

joonscribble November 9 2007, 17:30:29 UTC

WOW! A Torchwood/SGA crossover FTW!!

I just adore your Jack. He's just so...JACK. In every best possible sense. Awesome story!

donutsweeper November 9 2007, 17:46:16 UTC

Aww, thanks. I'm glad you liked it!

There's a silly little drabble set in that universe here, if you're interested.