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donut95

Unintended [Chapter 8/10]

Jun 03, 2010 13:33

Title: Unintended [Chapter 8/10]

Characters/Subjects: Kris & Adam, American Idol S8 and post American Idol

Word Count: Approx. 45,000 for entire story of 10 Chapters.

Rating: IDK! R perhaps.

Warning: Violence, rape and related triggers.

Disclaimer: 100% fiction. Everything is as fake as plastic surgery! I owned nothing.

Beta: NONE! All mistakes are ( Read more... )

!american idol, !kris allen, !kradam, !adam lambert

Comments 11

pinkeurogirl June 3 2010, 06:07:16 UTC

the poor boys. maybe the space will give them some perspective and they can rebuild?

indusnm June 3 2010, 06:40:02 UTC

Well, I have to think that Brad's actions might have been in Adam's best interest- but I have a lot of friends I love and I would never attack a rape victim on their behalf, so I'm not sure if that makes his actions any better. But I do get Adam's sense of blame- he made mistakes too. Kris is definitely better off with people who can put their lives on hold and just be there for him.

I'm not so sure that i want Kris to go back to Adam. I guess I don't see a future with someone who couldn't be there for him, who couldn't help him heal, when he was at his weakest...

missiexox June 3 2010, 08:06:59 UTC

i think what Kris is doing is the right thing for him. He needs to deal with a lot of his issues and he has to put himself first. I feel bad for Adam though. everyone is angry at him for leaving kris, but he needed to put himself first for once. he was there for kris for so long and kris was giving him nothing in return, which is understandable given the situation, but it must've been hard for Adam. he was at breaking point and so he decided to go away for a few weeks. i dont think he ever wanted for him and Kris to be separated forever! i love this story though!

marjorie2009 June 3 2010, 08:31:00 UTC

I so love this portion. To stay is to kill their love. Why? The cold shoulder, the struggle could make everything hard for both of them. Slowly they will drift and love will die. I know leaving is hard but Kris taking control of the situation is already progress. Recognition to resolve an situation is always the first step, the rest will follow. It is just a question of time.

Thanks.

ptarmigane June 3 2010, 09:13:13 UTC

Doing a good job on getting people emotionally engaged! And your writing is very good for non-native english speaker - I'm sure someone would offer to beta for you if you decide you want that ( ... )