Comments | dongbangsunegi: #85: Ache, ShinHae

mawaru_berry in dongbangsunegi

#85: Ache, ShinHae

Nov 26, 2009 22:36

Title; Ache
Fandom/Pairing; Shindong/Donghae
Rating; PG-13…? There's blood & a little swearing.
Summary; Shindong is the only one who knows Donghae's secret, but for now, he'll let it slide.
Author's Note; Ehh, it's okay. I liked where I was going with it, but I'm worried it's not good. You be the judge. I understand if it's less-than-satisfactory ( Read more... )

p: shin donghee/lee donghae, g: abuse, super junior, g: frienship, r: pg-13, mawaru_berry, 100 fic challenge, g: angst

Comments 9

slowemotion November 28 2009, 06:32:34 UTC

omggg this was even better. you did good in showing how things worsened and worsened as shindong didn't so anything to help and gosh i really wanna know who it was now lol

mawaru_berry December 2 2009, 04:42:14 UTC

Aw, thanks so much again for reading. Haha, yeah, maybe I should continue this so the culprit's revealed.

bb_gamekyu November 28 2009, 07:59:35 UTC

Wow.. I really love how you convey all the emotions. And im seriously curious as to who did that to donghae. And shindong,its sad that he felt so helpless. Great job writing!!

mawaru_berry December 2 2009, 04:42:39 UTC

:D
Thank you so very much!

tees2mai November 30 2009, 01:37:58 UTC

jksjlkdds!!!

NOOO WHO THE FCK WOULD HURT DONGHAE?

D8

*takes out baseball bat*

mawaru_berry November 30 2009, 02:46:56 UTC

XD

Your comment is win.

tees2mai November 30 2009, 15:33:52 UTC

bffimagine May 24 2010, 17:10:33 UTC

SO CONFUSED! WHO IS DOING THIS? *raises pitchfork*

I hope Donghae gets better and I hope they figure out what's going on... poor Shindong, trying to internalize all that and feeling helpless because he didn't know what to do...

Thanks for sharing!

elvenknight16 January 28 2011, 20:10:03 UTC

I LOVE THIS~
But poor Donghae & Shindong, I wonder who was the cause of the bruises Dx
Great Job Hun!!