[Fic] Naruto, Small Gestures

[domlandbubbles]

Title: Small Gestures
Characters: Rin, Naruto's mother (OC)
Rating: Uhh, PG-13? Someone's thinkin' about sex. Also, brief discussion of medic stuff.
Summary: Rin asks what's the nicest thing Yondaime has done for his...lady friend. She gets a kind of odd answer. Less than 1,000 words.

Notes: 1) I had planned a 10-part story starting from around

Comments

[hidden_gems]

Kawaii!!

♥

Seriously, that was adorable, and I really loved the part about all the things she can't tell Rin. Makes me want to start working again on the fic I'd planned about Yondaime and his girlfriend, starting from when they were kids...

[domlandbubbles]

Thanks! Heh. Planning is the easy part, it's the actual ficcing that's hard. I've been working on that 10 chapter thing for months now.

<3

[zelha]

I totally LOVED it!

I can see the "nee-san" making all a fuss over her hair, and our lovely Yondy, calming her down with only a few touches and words...

Brownie for ya, you rock!!! ♥

[lilithie]

This is very good ^.^ I luv the end!

[superfinemind]

Hello! I wandered here browsing fourth_hokage and...

Well. As somebody who pretty frequently has to tell the boy, "Hold on, I've got a hairtie"... This was beautiful. ^_^ And you've done a fabulous job fitting an original character and a not-very-fleshed-out character quite smoothly into such an established setting.

[doire]

Followed the link from Chunnin and I'd just like to say how much I liked this one.