Amending the End Game, Chapter Two

[domfangirlfic]

Title: Amending the End Game, Chapter Two
Author: domfangirl
Starring: Lincoln and Gretchen
Category: Multi-chapter (*curses*)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Gretchen comes to collect what she’s due.
Author’s Notes: This follows the events of Eulogy and is basically post-series (or at least post-season 4) IMHO. I make conjecture about what will happen in the final

Comments

[sierra_foxx]

Holy crap, Candy! *fans not Don self*

This is HAWT! Yowza. I really like the chemistry between these two as well, and you have gone waaay past where my brain had initially taken them, lol. (Not that that's a bad thing! I love it!)

Awesome stuff, my dear. *nods* And interesting concept with what Gretchie wants! I look forward to more of this!

*applauds*

[badboy_fangirl]

Hey thanks! I'm glad you're reading it and liking it. I thought they would be fun, I had no idea they'd be THIS MUCH fun. :D

[coffee_mill]

*fans self*

OMG.
OMFG.

It made my day. And it's made of win. And hot. And dirrrrrrty. And I love it *smirks*.

Gretchen wants WHAT? *re-reads*
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Continue, please!!
LOL

[badboy_fangirl]

Gretchen wants what she always wants: Everything. :D

Thanks, and more coming, I promise!

[heliokleia]

"Whores don't waste time with barriers, do they?" - O sweetheart, this is soo grumpy!Linc and my fav line of that 2nd part!
- And also a spontaneous applause for dear Gretch's reply...^^
*nods**nods*

Wonderful written, my Dear, and your choice of words fits the point (& their both tones) perfectly. A fabulous mix of wit and hawt, dirty sex!^^
*nods enthusiastically*
So, Linc & Gretchen team up? WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

Thank you very, very much, my Sweet One, for giving us such a brilliant and arousing story! I love. Every. Single. Word.
*huggles*

More, PWZ!!
*puppy eyes*

[badboy_fangirl]

:-) More to come, I promise, though probably not till next week. I love your icon, that's beautiful and true! :D

[clair_de_lune]

*smirks* Now I can see your, and Gretchen's, evil plan starting to unravel!

I loved this part II. And I have a soft spot for Lincoln freaking a bit over the shirt and sharing meal thing *g*

[badboy_fangirl]

Sometimes Linc's so cute I want to pinch his buttcheek.

I'm glad the plan is obvious to you. I got a review at pbfic that made me feel like I wasn't making it clear enough what was going on. I don't want to reveal everything at once, but I don't want people to be like WTF?

[bnleah]

I read this yesterday but I was in a rush so I didn't leave a comment... I'm back to leave one now because oh my this was HOT! HOT!! HOT!!! I had no idea I would like this pairing because I've never cared for Gretch on the show but in this fic - WOW - I am in awe of how explosive her & Linc are together. Your words enhance their chemistry and I can see them together like you've wrote them here very clearly.

These two chapters have been great and I can't wait for more...

[badboy_fangirl]

Hey Leah. Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it. I didn't expect it to be like it is either. I didn't expect it to take on a life of its own.

Thanks for coming back to leave a comment. That's very kind of you!