The Effect of James Whistler, Chapter Nine

[domfangirlfic]

Title: The Effect of James Whistler, Chapter Nine
Author: domfangirl
Starring: Lincoln and Jane, with special appearances by Sara, LJ, Michael, and Sofia.
Category: Multi-Chapter (to start from the beginning, go HERE)
Rating: PG-13 for a little making out
Summary: It was S3 with Jane added to the mix. Now it’s still set in S3, but it takes into account S4 in

Comments

[happywriter06]

OMG!!! So many things to love about this chapter. Just overall. I love the interactions between everyone. I mourn the lost of Jane and Sara together. I can just see them bonding. It's just so believable that this is how their lives could've turned out.

She had witnessed over the passing months, LJ’s dogged devotion to Sofia, and he didn’t seem to be aware that she viewed him as a little brother.
That entire paragraph is almost completely taken from my head. I've been mulling around in my head writing a fic about them.

Maybe all I thought about was that I love you, and you love me, and a baby would be like our love, walking around on two legs.
I'm with Jane. So cliche but so sweet. My heart! Linc is such a softie. It's so endearing.

And I need an icon that says Rambo Barbie. Best nickname ever.

What am I going to do with only one chapter to go?

[badboy_fangirl]

They just write themselves. Honestly. I was hoping to finish this up by the end of the year, but I don't think that's going to happen, even though chapter 10 is just sitting in my head.

I know, Rambo Barbie--we should have thought of that a LONG time ago! :D

Glad, as always, you liked!