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A Willing Sacrifice

Jan 12, 2008 22:35

Title: A Willing Sacrifice
Author: domfangirl
Starring: Sara, LJ, Gretchen (Michael/Sara)
Category: One-shot ficlet (660 words)
Rating: PG-13 (adult themes)
Summary: Sara's POV right before she dies.
Author’s Notes: I started thinking earlier today that I wanted to write something for stealmy_kiss who has a birthday coming up next week. She vacated the PB fandom ( Read more... )

michael/sara, prison break

Comments 31

muldy January 13 2008, 07:24:27 UTC

Oh wow. That was sad. Very well written and you almost made me cry.

badboy_fangirl January 14 2008, 18:58:58 UTC

I did make me cry! Thanks for leaving a comment!

ladykaru January 13 2008, 13:48:04 UTC

Oh my, this brought tears to my eyes... So very sad and wonderfully written. I liked it, but you could Went picspam all the same :p *g*

badboy_fangirl January 14 2008, 19:00:56 UTC

I suppose that's what a good friend would do, right? Picspam as well as the fic itself ;-)

Thanks for leaving a comment!

audiopineapple January 13 2008, 13:55:15 UTC

aww, so sad but I adored the line:

with coded origami and phone calls that said nothing and everything all at once. it summed up Michael so well.

badboy_fangirl January 14 2008, 19:01:37 UTC

Oooh, thanks for singling out that line. I liked that one too!

maggie0706 January 13 2008, 14:28:24 UTC

that was beautiful! and sad, and lovely... All at the same time. Thank you very much for this wonderful fic.

badboy_fangirl January 14 2008, 19:02:01 UTC

Oh, thank you for leaving a remark!

stealmy_kiss January 13 2008, 15:43:19 UTC

Oh Candy, this is BEAUTIFUL! You have depressed me, but in a really good way, lol. This makes me want to watch S1/S2 again; something I haven't let myself do since the second season ended.

I really love this line:

She remembers the taste of him that morning, how he’d had the flavor of familiarity instead of discovery, and how that had tripped her heart almost as much as his pleading words, Wait for me.

I love that they were so right for each other that she already knows him before she does...and that sounds super cheesy, but you know what I mean. ;)

I also love the part where she's sewing up her skin and thinking of all the pain that Michael has endured.

Thank you so much!!

badboy_fangirl January 14 2008, 07:20:20 UTC

Oh, I'm glad you liked it! Happy Birthday a bit early. It was a surprise for me, but I couldn't not post it. It came out so sad, but so pretty.

I'm just happy it depressed you in a really good way :-) Have a great week!