Rainbow

[domfangirlfic]

This is a companion piece to miss_vacant's piece Lighthouse. She wrote Sara's POV, I did Linc's. (I didn't DO Linc, I did Linc's POV, get your mind out of the gutters, people!) If Linc/Sara isn't your thing, don't read these, but really, you should read Lighthouse because it's simply breathtaking. This is my pale fangirl imitation.

Comments

[sk56]

Oh, you've done some lovely, lovely work here. You set up a tight structure with this

Michael was really dead. And if Michael was cold, Sara was warm. If Michael was gone, Sara was here.

but you don't go too far with it. And this

Michael would always be with them, but never between them.

is just right.

[badboy_fangirl]

*land triple axel perfectly* yay! I was really hoping for balance, and not over doing the comparisons, yet finding a similar feel to Tanya's work. Thanks again, for the technical concrit. *face glows with pride*

[winterqueen]

You've left me with hardly a breath left except to say I'm going to read Miss Vacant's fic right now.

Issy

[badboy_fangirl]

Good stuff, huh? :D

[badboy_fangirl]

Well, I'm quite glad you liked it--and it was the least I could do to make sure, that at least in the fic world, Linc gets to have sex. I'm glad this falls into the same universe as The Duck Story (which I think you should change the title, yeah?). That makes me love it even more. *pets broken Linc and Sara* *encourages them* Make babies, make babies!

[badboy_fangirl]

I've had them procreate (once a little girl, once a little boy) and the world is a better place for it!

[rosie_spleen]

Oh beautiful. And such a wonderful companion piece to Tanya's.

This paragraph is my favourite:

He could feel tears leaking from her eyes like baptism water trickling over his body. The night had been about goodbye, burying the dead and resurrecting the living.

and then ending with

"Michael would always be with them, but never between them.

So well done. Fantastic writing from the both of you - Im still not into the Linc/Sara possibility as such, but your writing weaves the web of 'maybe'

Loved it and thanks for writing,
Rosie

[badboy_fangirl]

I think you are like tearcreek who says she doesn't like Linc, but sekritly she does. You are a closet L/S shipper, admit it! ;-)

I'm off to read yours here shortly...

I too love the religious references, I thought it very poetic.

[happywriter06]

I need a tissue. You and Lj user="miss_vacant"> have me tearing up. Both fics so brillant.

If Michael died saving Lincoln, Sara lived rescuing him while he rescued her right back.
Right to the heart.

[badboy_fangirl]

*hands you a tissue*

It's bittersweet at best, isn't it? I don't really want Michael to die, for the record. But his death makes great angst.