the brave soul (Pam)

Feb 16, 2007 21:27

Title: the brave soul
Character/Pairings: Pam; Jim/Pam, Pam/Toby, Pam/Roy
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,551
Spoilers: "Business School"
Summary: There are certain paintings she leaves out. She doesn't like looking at them; they feel like accidents more than anything else.
Author's Note: This last episode reminded me exactly why and how much I love a ( Read more... )

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likeatuesday February 17 2007, 21:06:43 UTC
Oh, this is wonderful, just as is everything you write. Still, here are a few things I particularly loved...

“Nice,” Creed declares, nodding slightly and shoving his hands into his pockets. “Now where’s this supposed to be, exactly?”

This almost made me topple off my chair in amusement. I could so see Creed saying that, leaning forward a little, peering at it all... Creed-like. Hee.

Oh, and the art commissions from Jim made me smile, and really a bit sad for them. rather miss the Jam, when I really think about it. *sigh*

Toby! Hee. This line, here-

"She slips out of the break room just as he heads back in, and when she turns to look back at him for no particular reason, he still hasn’t picked anything - he’s just standing there. She kinda knows the feeling."

It's the stuff great writing is made of, methinks. Oh, Toby. Not to mention it really shows your rather strange bias for... Tam? Poby? Whatever. Because that sort of line, with its fantastic pitch perfect-ness, if any other writer thought of it, would probably have been reserved for the main ship. I do love how, in your mind, Pam/Toby is just as wonderful (if not more) as Jam. Though really, it kind of is, when I watch scenes like, "It's not art."

“I liked all of them,” he announces after a thoughtful second, like it’s a trick question and he knows he’s answering right. “They were all really amazing.”

Ohhh... that is Roy. That is Roy, so completely. I think that's what I love the most about your writing- you capture the characters so well.

Ack, I must scamper off and type up notes for US History now, cheers, and keep writing.

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dollsome February 20 2007, 02:34:09 UTC
Aw, thank you! You are too sweet. :) I'm glad you liked it!

Not to mention it really shows your rather strange bias for... Tam? Poby?

Bwahaha. Guilty. I really do love them. I do like to experiment with putting their characters together, even if it's not really overtly romantic, because they're so similar, in a way, and something about them just fascinates me.

Plus, crush havin' Toby is possibly the cutest, most soul-melting thing I have ever encountered.

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