Comments | dollsome: well then i like seeing you at bedtime (Jim/Karen, Ryan/Kelly, Michael/Jan, Dwight/Angela, Pam/Toby)

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well then i like seeing you at bedtime (Jim/Karen, Ryan/Kelly, Michael/Jan, Dwight/Angela, Pam/Toby)

Jan 08, 2007 17:53

Title: well then i like seeing you at bedtime
Pairings: Jim/Karen, Ryan/Kelly, Michael/Jan, Dwight/Angela, Pam/Toby
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3,675
Spoilers: Set in the not-too-distant future after "Back from Vacation"
Summary: Pillow talk, or something like it.
Author's Note: So, this is pretty much just me basking in how much I love all of these ( Read more... )

the office, office: dwight schrute, fanfiction, office: angela martin, office: dwight/angela, office: toby flenderson, office: ryan howard, office: jim/karen, office: kelly kapoor, office: pam beesly, office: jim halpert, fic: the office, office: karen filippelli, office: ryan/kelly, office: pam/toby, office: michael/jan

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kdsch123 January 9 2007, 03:27:42 UTC

This is really, really good. Not one off moment and I adored it. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us!!

dollsome January 9 2007, 05:49:08 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

ch_leesha January 9 2007, 03:30:02 UTC

That was so incredible! You captured each of their relationships so amazingly well. That is so rare. Thank you so much for sharing :)

dollsome January 9 2007, 05:51:11 UTC

Aw, thanks! :) I am way too in love with all the relationships on this show, so it's lovely to hear that I'm doing them justice.

Thanks again for reading!

avadaaccio January 9 2007, 03:30:13 UTC

verrry nice. wonderfully in character, and so believable.

i loved these lines:
apples aren’t pink, which is just like . . . he doesn’t even know
oh god, could that be anymore Ruyan? I actualy laughed out loud.

“We don’t have to stay here all night,” Toby says courteously after a few minutes have slipped by, sand-in-an-hourglass style (she dreads going home to an empty apartment, going to work on Monday, seeing Jim with Karen and remembering that this is what grown-up life has to offer).
Oh my dear sweet Toby, and poor Pam :/

“Then you wouldn’t understand,” he informs her darkly.
Heehe, so Dwight!

I also *loved* the Jim/Karen bit, with him "trying to get there" and hating himself for thinking of Pam.

dollsome January 9 2007, 21:26:53 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for taking the time to pick out the lines you liked. I absolutely love and appreciate seeing the specific stuff that works. :D Much with the awesome feedbacking!

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dollsome January 9 2007, 21:27:53 UTC

Thank you muchly! I'm glad you liked.

(And YESSS for Buffy quotage. :-D)

kyrafic January 9 2007, 03:33:35 UTC

Again, I don't even know where to start. Every part of this is amazing. I really like Jim's thought processes (‘I might be getting there’ ain’t gonna cut it) and his trying and hahaha, Ryan mumbling into the sheets, and not wanting to break up with Kelly, and that is EXACTLY Michael's night in, Dwight-cameo and all, and “Hello, Michael,” she says very steadily. She looks sort of crazy. HAHAHA PERFECT.

And oh. my. god.: “Do you ever feel,” he whispers, “that maybe, if you read the Bible enough times, eventually Jesus won’t wind up dying, and instead he and the disciples will live happily ever after?” HARRY POTTER VS. THE BIBLE. And why he loves that she's a sound sleeper!!

And oh, the low-key sweetness of the end. she dreads going home to an empty apartment, going to work on Monday, seeing Jim with Karen and remembering that this is what grown-up life has to offer

This wins everything.

dollsome January 9 2007, 21:32:46 UTC

Thank you, thank you! I always look forward to your feedback so much, because it is consistently made of awesome. :-D

HARRY POTTER VS. THE BIBLE

dun dun DUN. Haha, I felt sort of guilty even having that come out of my brain, but then I decided to just blame it on the fact that I was momentarily possessed by Dwight. Yep. Hum dee dum . . .