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Alternative Baking 101 (and Advanced Emotional Concealment) [Jeff/Annie, Part 2/2]

Mar 30, 2015 14:21

Alternative Baking 101 (and Advanced Emotional Concealment) - Community ; Jeff/Annie ; 2,800 words ; Part 2 of 2. In which Annie grapples with the Jeff of it all, and Greendale grapples with achieving any level of normalcy.

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wallows March 31 2015, 00:56:24 UTC

Literally went omg dollsome's fic is up when I saw this. So, so good. Amazing and hilarious. LOL'd so much at the Fake Sale. COOCH Bags! Reads like an episode, and Jeff and Annie-ness is the greatest. If I had a make-this-canon wand...

firthgal March 31 2015, 01:41:49 UTC

AAAAAH, LOVE LOVE LOVE! Augh, the scene on the bench was so perfectly romantic and such a great build-up to the kiss. Loved that Jeff practically fell off the bench when she kissed him. Loved that Annie was the one to take the initiative. Loved that the snakes turned out to be real. Loved the dean so freaking much, omg, you've got him down perfectly. Also, greatest last line to a fic ever. Loved both parts of this fic very, very much.

cgkm2099z March 31 2015, 01:44:39 UTC

So, could you take over writing for Chang? All of your characters are spot-on, but the actual writers don't seem to have any idea what to do with him, and frankly, they could use your help.

This was fabulous, thank you so much for sharing it with us!

theafterimages March 31 2015, 02:32:36 UTC

What a great conclusion!! I loved the fake sale twist, and as always some of these lines just killed me (HAS A SNAKE EVER STARTED A WAR. The entire snake section was brilliant, full stop.) And of course the Jeff/Annie of it all was perfect. What a good OTP. <3 Thank you for sharing this with us!!

crackers4jenn March 31 2015, 09:24:21 UTC

THIS IS THE GREATEST THERE EVER WAS. You are like some kinda crazy writer chameleon that slithers into fandoms with lizard-y ease to perfectly write and capture the different characters. You nail everyone! I want to point out particular lines/sections that stood out to me, but, like, pretty sure c/p'ing an entire fic gets your comment marked as spam. I will mention that I loved the entire moment that went down between parenthesis, with Chang shouting to be there or be GAAAAAYYYYEEE and Jeff's Pierce burn. AND THAT ROMANTIC JEFF/ANNIE BENCH MOMENT WITH THE SMOOCHING AND THE 'milady/milord' EXCHANGE, WHICH: !!!!!!!!!!!!

Basically, bless this tale, it will be my new canon.