Your heart is an empty room (DeWitt/Dominic)

[dollsome]

Title: Your heart is an empty room
Pairing: Adelle DeWitt/Laurence Dominic
Spoilers: 1x07 - "Echoes"
Word Count: 1,557
Rating: PG
Summary: In the wake of 1x07, Adelle ponders things even more incomprehensible than lentils.
Author's Note: OH, YOU KNOW I HAD TO GO THERE. I'd like to thank the combined forces of a) caffeine (too much, to be precise),

Comments

[quirkysmuse]

Wow. This is a very nice glimpse into Adelle's thoughts. The tone and the words you use within her observations fit her perfectly, and I can definitely see her having these feelings toward Dominic. Fantastic job.

[dollsome]

Thank you very much! :)

[morganize]

That was exactly what I needed after that last scene. And I think it does a superb job of interpreting Adelle's thoughts and feelings and seriously thank you for writing this.

[dollsome]

Thank you for reading it! :D I most definitely needed to write it after the last scene, I think. OH GOD THE AWKWARD AND THE TENSION AND THE SHIPPY. To be coherent about things.

[otempora42]

Ooh, loved this. I really like your portrayal of Adelle -- very self-aware, but still presenting this unfeeling exterior to the world.

[dollsome]

Thank you muchly! :)

[angearia]

Yes. Yes, yes, yes. This is what I wanted after watching Echoes. That awkward scene and the way she asked if he was alright over the phone. It's so clear that she thinks about him outside of work.

You have a wonderful knack and seem to completely 'get' Adelle. I look forward to reading more by you. You will write more DH fics, yes?

*puts in memories*

Would you mind if I friended you?

[dollsome]

Thank you very much! I had a really good time writing this one; I definitely hope I'll be inspired to do more fic for this show in the future.

And, no, I don't mind at all! :)

[blackmamba_esq]

I love these two. Thank you so much for writing this :D

[dollsome]

Aw, thank you for reading! :)