elevator music for just_drifting_6

[sevendayloan]

Title: Elevator Music
Author: sevendayloan
Rating: PG-13 for some sexuality. Nothing explicit.
Pairing(s): DeWitt/Dominic
Recipient/Prompt: just_drifting_6 // "Elevator"
Disclaimer: Dollhouse does not belong to me.
Summary: Still, he can't help it, there's something about the elevator that makes him ... nervous.

A/N: The notorious elevator fic is a pretty ambitious

Comments

[just_drifting_6]

Oh my god! Thank you so, so much! Serisouly, this is like, the best thing ever! Maybe I'm overreacting, but a fic written for me! And it's so good. Eee!

I'd copy and paste my favourite parts, but that'd pretty much be the entire thing. But:

He adjusts his tie.

She fixes her hair.

He fiddles with his cuff.

She straightens her skirt.

He checks his gun.

She unbuttons her blouse.

Well, shit. Don't look, he thinks. Don't look, don't look..

He looks.

So funny and wonderful! And:

Had he been imagining it? He must've been; there was no way that Adelle DeWitt, head of the LA Dollhouse and master of all she touches had just ... had she? Was she, was she laughing?

He needed to get more sleep.

Oh, Dom. Poor, poor Dom, and evil, evil Adelle. Just how they should be, of course ;)

I really liked how it was short and just like, a little moment between them that alluded to something but didn't change anything. And the Click-click-click was great; very well done.

Anyway, I'm just rambling on here, so I'll stop. Just, yeah, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANKYOU! You are wonderful! :D

[sevendayloan]

Oh man, yay yay yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. :D You offered up a ton of good prompts- it was hard to chose! I've never really written fic before, so I was all nervous and stuff, but in the end it was a lot of fun. So really, I should be thanking you! <3

[just_drifting_6]

You should write more! You're so good! I couldn't write something like this, for sure. And there is always need for more D/D fic in this world (I read somewhere, I think in your comment on dollsome's vid, that you've forgotten about this pairing--sorry, a bit stalkerish, but NO! Never! Write fic to keep you from falling out of love!) So, please...write.

Ah, that was a bit random. Sorry :/