This comment is for the last 3 chapters. I like how you are describing how this is impacting Reid and Luke, and how they are trying to deal with it. But without being overly dramatic.
I just caught up with the story again and read the last four chapters all at once. Your writing style is very enjoyable, it flows really well. You're very talented and again, your characterization is wonderful =). The interaction between Luke and Reid is just sooo... Luke and Reid. And I think I've said it before, but I would have loved to see this on the actual show <33.
P.S. This made me LOL XD: Luke giggled, “You’re such a box of cornflakes.”.
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And I think I've said it before, but I would have loved to see this on the actual show <33.
P.S. This made me LOL XD: Luke giggled, “You’re such a box of cornflakes.”.
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