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Super Junior; Kihae; How To Fail At Matchmaking

Aug 04, 2008 14:22

Title: How To Fail at Matchmaking When You’re Really, Really Trying (Not To)
Fandom: Super Junior
Pairing: Kibum/Donghae, other vague pairings
Word count: 4,301
Rating: PG-13
Summary: What the fuck?, thought Kibum. “What the fuck?” he asked.
A/N: For meitachi‘s birthday, Part 2. Posted way, way too early, because I’m just that awesome. I tied two of her ( Read more... )

fic, character: kibum, pairing: kihae, fandom: super junior

Comments 25

vic_sim August 4 2008, 13:37:20 UTC

this is so lovely. i like the way donghae was trying to pair kibum up with other people n that the rest all knew who kibum liked and vice versa for donghae.^^

looks around.i think i'm first!yay^_^
don't mind me.i'm just a little crazy right now.

meiface August 4 2008, 13:49:16 UTC

♥♥♥♥♥
♥♥♥♥♥

dokutoku_ai August 4 2008, 13:50:44 UTC

:D!

meiface August 4 2008, 13:58:24 UTC

Shush, I'm not done yet!

First, I laughed at the summary. Then I read the fic forgetting that you said you'd filled two requests and the liver line surprised me and had me rolling. Oh Donghae, you're special; poor, poor Hyukjae. XD

AND HEECHUL IS GLORIOUS AND WINS EVERYTHING, BECAUSE HE CAN LAUGH AT EVERYONE. ♥

alksjdflkd ahaha fuckin' A. I love a smart!Kibum and everyone being all "HOW DID YOU KNOW?!?!?!!" You guys, you are not that subtle. And clueless but well-meaning Donghae is always my precious and so cute and then the kissing. I LIKE THE KISSING. :D

LOL YOONA KNOWING.

I am so all over the place with this. THANK YOUUUUU. KiHae always makes me happy, it's true.

♥♥♥

meiface August 4 2008, 19:41:51 UTC

then Donghae came running to the room, flushed and happy. “You mean you like me?” he asked, smile so wide that it was almost heartbreaking.

This line makes me so happy in my heart.

panda3035 August 4 2008, 14:10:12 UTC

oh man.. it was so cute1 i love how donghae get so happy in the end! and hankyung! so failly at times liek this is fun!

tokyolights August 4 2008, 14:27:33 UTC

That was awesome and very well-written! *loves*

magicmelodyx August 4 2008, 16:18:03 UTC

“The one I like,” said Kibum with a grin, “is a complete idiot, is the only person in the entire world, apparently, who doesn’t know that I like him, and also, he is standing in this room.”

Donghae looked behind him.

Ahahaha Donghae ilusm. Your fail is made of adorable.

Poor Hyukjae and his liver. That boy really does put up with a lot, being Donghae's BFF. Not as much as Kibum, but still. *pats him*

In short, this was win. I really think you write some of my favorite KiHae.