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heechul_oppa in dokunwakuai

SHINee Fic: KeyHo

Jul 30, 2009 05:13

of rainbows and those who can see them
key/minho, romance (gen)
( There's a field of gold and blue with skies of green and trees of yellow and it stretches on for miles. )

p: keyho

Comments 29

conditionally July 30 2009, 10:40:34 UTC

Aw. Awwwww. AWWWWWWW. ;A; Why was this so cute and just gorgeously written? Seriously. I loved how Key was just like :/ all awkward about what to do because Minho is different and Minho trying to show affection not through words and awwwww.

"I'm not like you," Key says suddenly, voice harsh and serious. "I can't - I can't just watch from afar and analyze people. I can't - that just doesn't work for me." He breathes, shuddering and quiet. "I need you to tell me what's going on or. Or I can't understand."

wibbled because IT'S SO TRUE. And yes there needs to be more KeyHo in this world ;; ♥

heechul_oppa July 30 2009, 16:37:55 UTC

I think Key's a lot more awkward with some things than he lets on. Especially concerning a topic that he can't really comprehend. Haha, like a kid who refuses to answer a question in class when he doesn't know the answer.

*bawling* Guh. Thank you. ♥

yumeyana July 30 2009, 11:56:32 UTC

aaw. ♥

heechul_oppa July 30 2009, 16:38:25 UTC

;) ♥

fayelafee July 30 2009, 12:00:25 UTC

That was really, really sweet. I love it! :3

heechul_oppa July 30 2009, 16:38:55 UTC

Aw, thank you. :D

ghostdrop July 30 2009, 12:17:35 UTC

idk, but i really like the broken-ed..-nes... of it. ♥

"I can't do words," Minho says offhandedly, watching the sun dip lower in the sky, fiery, blazing. "But I hope you can understand me anyway."

so sweet i got cavities ;~; your minho is adorable.

heechul_oppa July 30 2009, 16:40:08 UTC

LOL. Baw, that's really nice to hear. :)

And yes, I am incapable of writing anything but fluff. XD Ngl.

scylladakylla July 30 2009, 15:16:13 UTC

I melt forever and ever. ♥

Love the contrast between the two, how Minho isn't really one for expressing himself with words, how Key wasn't able to understand before and is uncomfortable and awkward but finally does get it in the end. Love the way Minho analyzes Key's body language, watches him shred up grass and tries to figure out what's wrong.

pausing in his minuscule destruction of nature
This line made me smile.

"I can't do words," Minho says offhandedly, watching the sun dip lower in the sky, fiery, blazing. "But I hope you can understand me anyway."
♥

And the entire kiss scene and the ending, guh. ♥ So prettily written.

heechul_oppa July 30 2009, 16:44:01 UTC

I think, despite Minho gaining confidence lately (see: becoming a whore D<), he's still a person who likes being alone once in a while. I mean, I'm sure every idol dreams of alone time at some point, but for him I think it's more of a matter of character than anything.

dla;sldk Awwwww. ;_____; Thank you. ♥