Forbidden Desire by LuxKen27 [Drabble #11]

[luxken27]

Title: Forbidden Desire
Author: LuxKen27
Theme: "Glimpse" prompt
Genre: Drama
Universe: Canon
Rating: T
Warnings: Mmmm, innuendo :D
Word Count: 100
Summary: Kagome has a secret.

Comments

[landofthekwt]

Thank you. Very nicely done. The single words of feeling are so effective. They give her glimpses of what she wants.

[pos_sess_ed]

This is very powerful. You feel the words as you creep into the forest with her... Very well done!

[luxken27]

Thank you! It was an extension of an idea I had for another prompt (linked in the author's note). This style works really well for short word limits, I think.

[beermoney5]

Great job! Well written.

[luxken27]

Thank you :)

[tallymark]

A delightful kiss in the dark...excellent build-up.

[luxken27]

Thanks! :) This is the first time I've ever written something as a prequel...and I must say, it does make life easier if you know what you're striving for :P

[redglade]

Ooo, go get him Kagome! Bet she won't be getting any sleep. I enjoyed this.

[luxken27]

Hehe