I Fought with You Once Upon a Dream by aimee_blue [drabble#75]

[aimee_blue]

Title: I Fought with You Once Upon a Dream
Author: aimee_blue
Prompt: All Purpose
Words: 835
Genre: General, Hurt/comfort
Rating: M
Warnings: Nudity
Summary: CU.Sometimes it takes a different perspective to reveal that something has been missing for a long time.

Comments

[therentyoupay]

Ahhh, how lovely! What a clever idea, and a beautiful execution. There are only two lines that I would like to give you a heads up for consideration:

"not be capable of the same feet" feet --> feat

"who had been discussing him as if he was a slab of meat" was --> were

Aside from those two measly details, it was absolutely gorgeous! I absolutely love the ending, and I especially love the last line. Definitely a one-shot to remember!

[aimee_blue]

Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you spotted my little errors, I wrote and posted it in a hurry to get it in before the deadline... and then the deadline got extended ^_^

First review ever

[irishlass0770]

I really enjoyed your story, and thought it was very well done. It is something that you could expand on if you so desired. thank you for writing it.

[kittenmymittens]

I loved this. When I read it, I imagined it all taking place in my painting class at art school. It fit perfectly. XD

[henhito]

Great job. This was really well written. I really like how she waits and does a meaningful reveal of her identity and knowledge, it made it more moving.

[ejunknown]

;u;

Bitter-sweet tale, with the years and changes that he has undertaken (and her, I suppose as well). This is sweet, and brilliant. >u< wonderful job!