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Jun 05, 2011 18:03

A wee Sunday snippet!

Pull You In (~450 words, Steve/Danny) (also on AOOO)

Danny does it all the time, reaches out and touches Steve )

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sheafrotherdon June 5 2011, 22:14:28 UTC
sadfkhasdlkfasdf oh, oh, oh, Steve comes right away, no hesitation at all made my belly do such swoopy things. asdalhsdf I love this, I love a whole relationship built from touch, and Steve waiting for Danny to figure out what he wants to do asdkjhflasdf. And okay, all right :D :D :D :D DANNY.

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dogeared June 5 2011, 22:21:36 UTC
a;dflasdkj Steve is the MOST besotted (though clearly Danny is a little, too). :D :D!

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kristen999 June 5 2011, 22:20:46 UTC
Awww. Love this influx of emotion and collective self awareness. Especially the details like They're in their usual spot at the edge of Steve's beach, in the old chairs that shouldn't be as comfortable as they are, beers sweating into the sand and everything quiet..

Lovely.

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dogeared June 5 2011, 22:22:41 UTC
Oh, thank you so much!!

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bhayling June 5 2011, 22:31:31 UTC
I love a whole relationship built from touch

SO with you there! It's so well-grounded in canon, too, that this flows beautifully out what we see onscreen week after week -- Danny's tactility where Steve's concerned, his ability to rein Steve in, to help him center, to settle him back onto the rails, all with touch and that soft, low, calm tone of voice.

Really enjoyed this look at Danny and Steve. :-)

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dogeared June 5 2011, 22:53:56 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed, and that you feel like it fits in with canon things, thank you!! :)

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crossmymind June 5 2011, 22:42:10 UTC
So he tugs, just a little, and Steve comes right away, no hesitation at all, just leans right in toward Danny like it's easy

sdfkjslkdjflksd WHY DID YOU STOP

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dogeared June 5 2011, 22:54:30 UTC
Ahahaha sorry!! I'm sure they're having some happy, touch-hungry sex even as we speak. :D

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crossmymind June 5 2011, 23:18:47 UTC
And we should be watching.

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pollitt June 5 2011, 23:43:38 UTC
Oh JENNS! <3 <3 <3

I love all of this coming together and then the kiss and of COURSE Steve would come close with no hesitation because this is *now*.

Gorgeous, hun.

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dogeared June 6 2011, 00:17:58 UTC
Oh thank you, sweets-I'm so glad you like this wee thing!! :D <3

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