SPN Fic: To Everything A Season (Pt 9/12) (Gen, R, FutureFic)

[dodger_winslow]

So here's the two sections that got lopped off part 8. I, myself, view this as part of chapter 8, as I felt it got a little shorted on the non-exposition parts of the story, as these two scenes were the gut kickers I meant to top off all that exposition and chit-chatting and waiting about, but LJ wouldn't let me post them. Argh!

So anyways, here

Comments

[apieceofcake]

What was I saying about not crying? It's Mary's fault with the whole "I'm not leaving you"...*sob* *sniff*

Lovely!!!!!!!! And Sammy & Danny were cuteness :-)

[dodger_winslow]

Thanks! (I LOVE your icon ... it totally cracked me up!)

I've had to be really careful about Danny. Originally, I didn't give him any on-screen time at all just because I knew, if I did, he was going to start getting all screen-hoggy and want to take over the whole fic.

Hopefully he hasn't done that, but if not, certainly not for lack of trying. The dude is relentless in telling me heartbreaking things about the man he is.

[embroiderama]

Oh, you're killing me, so much good stuff to read today. This thing about John losing more recent memories--very disturbing!

[dodger_winslow]

Thanks. :D

Ah ... much more disturbing in about two more chapters ... ;)

[vaznetti]

Oh, poor little Sammy. That just breaks my heart. And it was nice to see a bit more inside Danny.

And I liked the scene with Mary and Dean very much.

[dodger_winslow]

Thank you. For some reason, one of my fanfic sqees has always been to create a "best friend" for the characters I most dig, just to explore the dynamic of someone who would be worthy of that status in their eyes. I'm sure that is where Danny came from ... the kind of man that I could see John respecting and liking enough to consider him his closest friend. Especially functional-if-haunted John.

[dolimir_k]

God I love your writing! Truly I do!

The whole scene with Danny and Sammy was wonderful. It felt so honest. And the thing with the spitting camel made me burst out laughing.

The scene with Danny and Sarah just broke me. Again so honest.

And I loved the scene with Danny and Dean. Just because I adore these two characters doesn't mean they adore each other. Very cool. I like the tension there and I like Danny's warning about Dean needing to be respectful.

And, of course, I loved the scene with Dean and Mary.

You seriously need to look into turning this into an original fiction novel. I mean it. I believe you're truly that talented to pull it off!

[dodger_winslow]

Thanks so much

[smilla02]

I've been immersed in this in the last three hours 8(OMG it's 3 a.m. I have to be up in four hours). This is beautiful, I had started with the intention of reading a couple of chapters for catching up from where I had I had left a mont ago (that was the first chapter), and I could not stop even to drink some water.
This story is amazing, it is painfully honest and heartbreaking and everything about it rocks so much. I wish I was more coherent to tell you exactly what I like of it, but in all honesty there is not a single thing I don't like, from your OCs to the characterization of the "regular", the waythe storys unfolds quitly along the years. This makes for an increadible read.
I crave for more.

[dodger_winslow]

That is the coolest thing you could say to me. I love catching someone who is intending to just read a few pages and dragging them through with me to the end. It is the greatest compliment, IMO, a writer can get.

Missed you while you were gone. Glad you're back.