Comments | doctorsmcdreamy: "Wise Up" 2/?

abelfan in doctorsmcdreamy

"Wise Up" 2/?

Apr 09, 2007 23:42

Author's Note: Hi there, sorry I didn't get this one written and posted sooner. I've had a lot going on in my life and then the past week I've been sick with a nasty viral infection, so writing hasn't been my top priority. I'm not sure if I completely like this chapter but, ehh I'm posting it. There's no dialogue between the McMarrieds, it's all ( Read more... )

Comments 4

pickleminded07 April 10 2007, 16:21:56 UTC

Derek better wise up soon coz I really want to kill him. Seriously. Glad to see him realize how shitty he has become but I want him to do something about it. Right. Now.

Great update. More soon please. :)

abelfan April 10 2007, 16:28:26 UTC

Thanks for the feedback; I appreciate it!

Yeah, I often want to kill Derek. What a McFriggin'Asshole/Bastard! And yeah, while it's nice and all that he has these realizations in his head, he's not exactly doing anything about it. And he called Addison the Queen of a Land called Passive Aggressiva. I think Derek is far more passive-aggressive.

no_good_deed44 April 10 2007, 22:21:51 UTC

I kind of hate Derek, but that's not new. I love the way you write Addison, though. I really, really, like this story.

abelfan April 11 2007, 02:10:48 UTC

LOL, Derek was rather hateable (non-word?) last season. But that fact got totally glossed over b/c you know, Addison was the Wicked Witch of the East who slept with Derek's best friend and stole McDreamy from Meredith. *rolls eyes*

Aww, glad you like my portrayal of Addison. Poor woman is conflicted and can you blame her?

Glad you're enjoying it; thanks so much for the feedback!