"Wise Up" 10/?

Jul 04, 2007 02:26

Author's Note: Well, just a little over a week this time. This chapter is…not my best, I must admit. It's a rather long chapter, most of it is filler/transition and there is no Derek/Addison interaction in it, but some of it is important. So I hope you enjoy and I appreciate all your feedback. Thanks! Happy Fourth of July to my American ( Read more... )

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sking20854 July 6 2007, 20:40:21 UTC
So I'm finally responding, sorry for the delay.

So this chapter was love for me, because of Addie/Savvy those rhyme by the way ;)! Anywhoo I always am up for people that truly love Addison and are there for her, I know that they tried with Bailey and Callie, but I think it's a different relationship with people that have been with you through all your ups and downs, as well as their own. Addie having a real friend is just love for me, because if there is one thing I envy Meh fans for is Christina.

Now Derek needs a kick in the ass, because he still doesn't get it, he doesn't get that this is no longer a competition on who shit on who worse, him whining to the chief about Mark is so sad, and yet so predictable. Doesn't he realize that "well she started it" is so damn childish?? Grow up you big ole baby!!

And you know how I feel about Mark, written the right way I could have jumped all over the Maddison bandwagon, so him showing up at the end brought a smile to my face. They aren't my endgame, but if it forces Derek to grow the hell up, then I'm all for his continued presence.

I liked it, and really I'm the only thing that matters anyway. ;)

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abelfan July 18 2007, 16:19:59 UTC
OMG I am so sorry that I didn't reply to this right away, hon! I honestly meant to and thought I had but when I posted ch 11 last night I realized that I didn't--whoops!

Thanks for the awesome feedback! Addie/Savvy do rhyme, aren't they love? Yes, yes while I love Addie with Callie/Bailey/Richard, heck Burke and even in this fic George, it is nice to see her relate to someone who's known her for so long and been there for her.

Amen about Derek needing a kick in the booty! That's the thing that killed me on the show about him--he came across as rather petty. I mean obviously cheating on him with his best friend is wrong but you know, grow the feck up and realize your part in it!

Ha, Mark had to show up. In fact the first few chapters Derek was such an ass that people wanted him to rescue her (for a time) but now they're not too sure about him messing with Addek. ;)

Of course it is! :D

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