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Happiness (3/13)

Oct 17, 2011 17:17

Happiness (3/13)
by me, doctorpancakes
Fandom: Nathan Barley
Pairing: Dan/Jonatton
Rating: R, this chapter
Word Count: 1022, this chapter (3789, so far)
Warnings: references to cars; sexytiems
Disclaimer: Brooker and Morris own Nathan Barley, not me. I own a pot of homemade dulce de leche simmering on the stove, but not these characters, sadly.
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happiness, nathan barley, slash, henley-on-thames, dan/jonatton, porsche 911

Comments 19

tabithaarbella October 17 2011, 22:57:50 UTC

I have actually been to the Henley Regatta...it was for a work thing...I'm not posh lol...and you've nailed it lol...

Ace stuff...you need more comments though this is ace bubbles...

doctorpancakes October 17 2011, 23:58:22 UTC

I've been to Henley Regatta too, and I'm not posh either. The house I stayed at is basically the house in this story, right down to the Jag sign by the door. Cheers, luv!

jadore_histoire October 17 2011, 23:02:11 UTC

HOW ARE YOU SUCH A GOOD WRITER OH MY GOD. Your imagery is so....vivid and Dan's inner monologue is absolute perfection.

And with just one line, I love Jonatton's mum already XD

doctorpancakes October 18 2011, 00:04:25 UTC

She IS kind of great.

jezziejay October 17 2011, 23:27:04 UTC

Sigh. It just keeps getting better. I don't know how on earth you manage to make the arse that is Jonatton so utterly endearing. And then you give him an awesome mother. I am so loving this.

doctorpancakes October 18 2011, 00:48:32 UTC

*bluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuush* You are too, too, too kind. Why you so nice? :3

pitpony13 October 18 2011, 01:11:52 UTC

I can already tell that I'm going to like Jonatton's mother! And the fact that he took Dan to see his parents without telling him is hilarious, but perfect!

Looking forward to more!

doctorpancakes October 19 2011, 06:43:31 UTC

He couldn't possibly have made the introductions the usual way, after all, could he? ;) Glad you approve!

life_downsized October 18 2011, 06:26:50 UTC

Oh, Jonottan, you naughty boy! I will happily second everyone else here: I already love Elizabeth, Jonottan is so wonderfully sweet for someone who's just bought an obscenely yellow sports car, and Dan is just...well, he's Dan, isn't he? Looking forward to the next installment, etcetera?

doctorpancakes October 19 2011, 06:45:27 UTC

To be fair, I do actually bloody love the 911, but I hate convertibles and yellow is a stupid colour for a car. As for Dan, well. THANK YOU!!!