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Fic: Another Sky (10/11)

May 03, 2011 21:25

Another Sky (10/11)
by me, doctorpancakes
Fandom: Nathan Barley
Pairing: Dan/Jones
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1152, this chapter (12928 so far)
Warnings: Nathan Barley
Disclaimer: I own a jumper with caravans printed on it (which I have named "Clarkson's Nightmare") but I sure don't own the folks from this show from which I somehow managed to pull ( Read more... )

nathan barley, slash, dan/jones, fanfiction, another sky

Comments 15

jadore_histoire May 4 2011, 03:56:13 UTC

Aw, cliffhanger!

but ever since Jones gathered up his turntables and took up residence in Dan’s heart, life was a festival of the unexpected.

I LOVE THIS! LOVE THIS LINE SO MUCH!

And Nathan's a douche, but you write him so well! Not saying YOU'RE a douche, but you write him well!

doctorpancakes May 4 2011, 20:49:39 UTC

Cliiiiiiiiiiiiiiffhangerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

(It's not really that suspenseful, is it? I guess FOR ALL WE KNOW, THERE'S A MICROSCOPIC CHANCE THAT CARYS MIGHT TURN INTO A FILING CABINET AND FLY TO SATURN, but I'm not that interesting, believe me)

It's ok if you think I'm a douche, I still love you.

hauntedmuffin May 4 2011, 08:28:22 UTC

CMON ITS BABY TIME, BABES.
LETS DO THIS.
x

doctorpancakes May 4 2011, 21:36:03 UTC

YEAHHHHHHHHHHH WE GONNA

pitpony13 May 4 2011, 13:55:10 UTC

This is so exciting! I can't wait for Dan and Jones to officially become parents!

doctorpancakes May 4 2011, 22:25:28 UTC

I SWEAR IT HAPPENS IN THE NEXT CHAPTER BECAUSE THAT CHAPTER'S THE LAST ONE AND I'D BE A TERRIBLE PERSON IF I JUST STOPPED LIKE RIGHT NOW.

saena17 May 4 2011, 21:09:52 UTC

Noooo I was so excited for the next chapter because I wanted to see adorable Dan and Jones, but I got Nathan instead. :( I mean, the writing was great as always, but...Nathan. When we could have been getting adorable Dan and Jones. ;)

But now I can't wait for the NEXT chapter, which I assume will have that as well as a baby!! (And then more stories showcasing their mad parenting skills? And possible the addition of a Howard/Vince wedding? I'm just going to keep making suggestions here.)

doctorpancakes May 4 2011, 23:53:35 UTC

First off, nice job with the facepalming icon.

Look, I'm really sorry about Nathan, but there's the thing precisely: like it or not, the guy's a presence in our heroes' lives, you know? A presence that, realistically, they just kind of have to put up with, albeit grudgingly. This isn't his story per se, but he's a part of it.

(As for the suggestions, they're being written as we speak, among other things, so yeah)

saena17 May 5 2011, 01:01:29 UTC

It is only made better by you having a matching facepalming icon. :P I think both of those combined encapsulate Nathan Barley himself in a nutshell. He certainly adds his own brand of special to any occasion.

(Yay! I had a feeling they were already in the works, but you know, just thought I'd reinforce.)

doctorpancakes May 5 2011, 03:57:32 UTC

Nathan Barley is a very special person. That's a nice way of putting it. :)

Hehehehehe YEAH I'M WRITING LIKE 6 THINGS RIGHT NOW. Keeps me from getting bored, I suppose. Plus Dan Ashcroft's novel. I have high hopes that it will one day become a staple at book clubs around the country, but this remains to be seen. XD

websurffer May 5 2011, 00:37:53 UTC

I am usually not a fan of Nathan at all but he's so cute in this that I actually like him. And ah! The baby is getting all born! I hope next chapter will have Jones's reaction.

doctorpancakes May 5 2011, 03:46:56 UTC

Nathan's a cock. But he's not a completely terrible person. I still feel bad seeing bad things happen to him. Is this weird?

THE BABY IS ABOUT TO GET BORNED. EVERYTHING YOU KNOW IS ABOUT TO CHANGE FOREVER.