Fanfiction "Staff Meeting" gen, G, 1/1

[docfred]

Author:docfred
Title:Staff Meeting 1/1
Rating:Gen , G
Characters: several
Warnings:none
Author's Note: My first fanfic. Been an addicted reader for several years and decided what the hell let's give it a try.

Comments

[vickysg1]

Like it!

Good job for a first fic!

[ausmac]

Couple of suggestions from an old hand.

Firstly, put spaces between your paragraphs. It's very hard on the eye when everything is jammed up together. People are more likely to read your story if it's physically easy to read.

Second, give it a good read through to check for errors or have someone check it for you. In your first para you say:

about an intern they dealt with in privately and

and if they can perform they duties efficiently

One last point - when you use a number, especially by itself, correct useage is "Twelve." rather than "12", otherwise the reader thinks you are quoting a numerical.

I'm assuming there is a word missing there.

And let me say - Caldwell is the man! I love him. Good to see him in a story. If you decide to write more and would like some beta help and writing tips, I can possibly help (assuming you don't hate me after the above).

review

[docfred]

thank you very much for the tips. I have never written this way so the review helped greatly. I will probably take you up your offer of beta.

[world_of_blade]

I really enjoyed this fic. It is so true to life that staff meetings are like this. Hope you write more. :)

[docfred]

thanks glad you enjoyed it.

[hopalong_pxp]

*Shakes head* I'm feeling sorry for anyone who has to deal with Kavanaugh.

Well done!