let it go (10/?)

Nov 13, 2011 00:01

Let it go: Chapter Ten
Paring: Matsumiya
A series of events from Nino and occasionally Ohno’s points of view

Thanks to  satsumatsuas always for looking over this!

This was not going according to plan at all )

fanfiction, matsumiya, arashi

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rim1789 November 13 2011, 08:53:08 UTC
I M SO HAPPYYYYYYYY ^^ XD Okay I know it's not compete but I'm already glad with this! I actually checked your LJ more thanonce yesterday *___________*

Aaaaaaaah it'xs Domyoji! I wondered if it was him, but when I saw the blue tie, I thouhg, '' it ay not be MatsuJun''

Back to the story ^O^ So Finally, Nino knows....And not the good way, he simply overheard Karina and the others talking * facepalm* He is clearly distressed :( // I love it...Ugh total M, here //

His last message to Aiba is quite full of distress, which I can understand D8 And Riida realized that he 'stole' without knowing, MatsuJun's love interest.

Will come back when the whole chapter is written. OH AND BTW!

I read the talk about sex Aiba and Jun did in your fanfiction xDDD I really liked Aiba POV. You made it seem real, especially the conversation how they both acted during it...Aiba nervousness etc. Haha, yeah MatsuJun is ''very very sexy'' to qute your other fanfiction ;) //Though I didn't find his AnAn sexy...Especially the bathroom one, it was more '' OMG IT S SO CUTE!''//

I loved how you described his inner thoughts. Such a cute Junba <3 And I'm not usually a JunBa fan, but your fanfictions make me love all the pairings all the same! ^^You write them so well. I'm always quite impressed.

About the Junba serie : This girl is TOTALLY mental. Poor MatsuJun, noone dared speak to him or acknoledge him in France.I'm so glad for how Sho reacted and Ogura-san. I'm so glad they were here for him....* facepalm at the police scene with the girl. GIRL FOR REAL DDDDX *

I'm so happy he kept contact with Nino and Aiba and they are here for him, though it might be a bit cruel for him do coninue keeping contact with iba when he knows the other feelings and thinks he can't answer them //Of course, we all know he can 8DDDD!!!//

I'm really glad Nino came in Tokyo. Seriously. Thank you. MatsuJun need all the help he can get especially since he is worried (more han he let it known) about that girl DX

Still didn't find the time to read the Juntoshi, and saw that you published another one...Will do later. Now I have to study DX

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doctoggy November 14 2011, 00:07:21 UTC
I am indeed updating. I will comment when this one is up and ready.

Nino does know, and we shall see how he reacts.

But YAY for reading the other ones.

I am glad that you like the Juba's, they are a lot of fun to write. It would be awkward, having that conversation over dinner, and

And as for the series, she is crazy, but Aiba and NIno and Saotshi are coming to the rescue!!!!!!! Technically, Jun and Aiba are still dating, but yeah, if Jun were to find someone else, that would be cruel, wouldnt it.

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doctoggy November 27 2011, 07:19:50 UTC
added more. this chapter is done, me thinks

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rim1789 November 27 2011, 08:18:56 UTC
Aaaaaaaaaah! ^^ Yesterday, just before going to bed I saw that you added a bit (but still incomplete) and I thought ''Tomorrow I will read and comment'') I 'm so happy with the chapter.

That letter was really beautiful. I'm really happy we get to see Nino's reaction...And that MatsuJun explained everything in his letter about the Quiproquo.

It was so sad...The letter...Letting his older brother be in love with the same person he loves '' Jun was that selfless'' ....I really liked the letter, because it felt like something he would totally do. I can believe it with no problem. I love how it was worded also, explaining everything, giving reasons...And at the same time not really imposing his feelings and trying to act like a friend and say they will be.

I was a bit :/ when I read that they didn't need any programmer there....And I wished Nino would have acted and not let Riida do it // Cause he is acting...Bringing the painting to Jun I suppose and telling tje truth about the project...I think Nino should have done it, actually...It's not really Riida's place to say ...//

I suppose Shun and Sho know the full truth now, otherwise they would be colder... //Well we know Sho knows //

''“Thanks for finish the program, it works well as always.”'' So sad T_____T

Anyway, I have to go. Got a test tomorrow and need to study. DX

You don't know how Happy I am to find Chapter 10 updated and written ^^ I actually came to check more than once in the maintime xD Love your fanfictions so much.

Bye dear <3

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doctoggy November 27 2011, 21:34:57 UTC
I also wrote a yama. not sure if you saw that. in addition to the juntoshi that you havent read ;) what can i saw, i am shameless and like your comments :)

i am glad the sadness of the letter came across, it was interesting to write, and this was going to be a depressing chapter. ^^*

riida will only do so much. in the end nino and or jun will have to do something. so just wait and see. we will be back to the Jun/Aiba/Sho POV in the next chapter.

Sho and Shun do indeed know, (remember that Ohno and Sho had that conversation at the art show about it, as well as a breakfast later to clarify things) but what can really be done.

Good luck on the test!

Sorry for the delay. With my vacation and then the holidays I got behind on writing, but I am trying to catch up now!

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