Let it go (6/?)

Nov 06, 2011 01:05

Still working on this, but a preview for those who stalk me are my friends

Let is go: Six
A story from Matsumoto Jun and Aiba Masaki’s perspective
Pairing: Matsumiya, Ohmiya (friendship)

Thanks again to satsumatsu for being super amazing and knocking out a whole bunch of edits and proofs for me. <3

All good things must come to an end )

fanfiction, matsumiya

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rim1789 November 7 2011, 06:50:16 UTC
I'm dead tired, but I came on your page out of curiosity, to see if you had any new OS or something you still haven't posted, and I found this :DDDD

Is Nino making a portrait of Jun or a painting for him O___O...But him and Satoshi, as good ans awesome their intentions are (for which I have no doubts) they are making things seemingly more complicated * sigh*

Wait xD They said that they were going for a drink with Aiba...Did they really ? XD r did they go sketching or whatever it is that they do?

AIBA! <3 I really really like that part of the chapter( I know you're still working on it but I review anyway, the part so far ^^). The JunBa conversation was reallygood. Though Aiba doesn't say much, e can literally feel how kind he is and how he tries to help Matsumiya, and here MatsuJun and confort him, though he doesn't really know how.

The Okinawa deadline is coming close :/

Oh you told me in previous chap '' remember, Nino hates the beach'' ...I don't remember...When did he say that ? Well I'm not really surprised,as he did get sick on boat...But I didn't know ...

Or is it just in your fanfiction ? "don’t. I hate the beach and the sand, and would much rather stay in the city. Besides, there are no video games at the beach.”

'' would much rather stay in the city'' Ouch. Though he doesn't know ( I think?) that Jun is moving ( and Satoshi too doesn't know ?), that can stung a bit the younger man. In a way, unintentionnaly, he answered the question about how he would feel of moving there

Saw that you updated your JunBa.Still have lots of things to do, but I want to rest also. Will read it later <3

See you again when this chapter is completed xD

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doctoggy November 7 2011, 07:01:30 UTC
nino made it clear in himitsu with all the beach dates that he hates the beach, so i am playing off of that one.

and ist hat what nino is doing? who knows. :) except me. i know. :)

i had to out a juba moment in, even if it was just friendship.

everyone is trying to get them together, but no one is succeeding. which is sad for them all.

Nino does not know.
Satoshi does know.

and he did answer the question as to if he liked the beach, it may be different if it was with jun, but who knows. :)

i have a juntoshi PWP and two Jubas that you are behidn on, and this should be done in an hour or so as well. :)

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rim1789 November 7 2011, 10:54:31 UTC
That icon! xD

Yeah, I know about the three stories I'm behind DX And I widh I could read them, but my schedule is hectic DX College will end at 10pm today and tomorrow and I have so many things to do before Wednesday, it's crazy O_O

You made me feel sad. That's something. I read so many fanfictions that I'm quite unfazed usually, but yours still managed to make me feel sad xD

My heart aches for how Jun must be feeling here...Nino refusing to speak wih him andd how he is acting... He finally thought he found '' the one'', and once again, he is in love with his brother ( well, that's what he thinks)...

And Sho being helpless and annoyed, and Aiba being such a good friend too ''his heart breaking at the brave smile that Jun tired to put on''

You Killed me D8 TT_____TT

AND I LOVE IT!

I really like these kinds of sad things in stories...

Though it wasn't Nino intention, he actually made him more resolute. “What I need it to talk, but you have made it clean that can’t happen.”...Ugh. Nino should have done something.

I'm now worried Nino won't come after him. I mean...That he would simply stay in Tokyo, thinking Jun should be the one to come and speak with him.

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doctoggy November 7 2011, 18:29:16 UTC
yay killing!!!!

i mean-- dont die!!!!!!!

just wait and see. :)

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doctoggy November 7 2011, 09:20:29 UTC
also, added a bit more. :) so the chapter is done.

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