Songs I've Wrote

[dntcloseurheart]

Ok, so we all kow that I write alot of diffrent genres...i had to write a myth today in English (I hate writing when I have to. Writing shouldn't be mandatory or demanded. I should do it becuase I want to)..but I digress. I've posted poetry, and now I'm going to post some lyrics I have wrotten. Comments would be appreciated, but remeber to be con-crit.

Gone
Verse A
Death is knocking at our door
While love tries to save our broken souls
A final kiss, one last embrace,
then we'll walk into this world alone

Interlude
Whoaaa...

Verse B
A ghost of the past is my new best friend
Never to see your face again
Empty days and sleepless nights
darken a life that used to seem so bright

Bridge
(Empty) I feel so dead
(Empty) Do you feel this too?
(Empty) Just one more night I'll be alone

Chorus
(Gone) But you're not here
(All) Alone I'll cry
(Good) Bye to you I'll cry
my love,
my rapture,
my light.

Song formation:
Verse A
Interlude
Verse B
Bridge
Chorus
Break
Chorus

My Sharpie Lullabye

Verse A
Scratched names,
unable to read just what was said
Can you feel it?

My broken heart turns to stone
Don't think I'll be able to go on,
But somehow,
I'll find a way.
I always do.

Chorus
My sharpie lullabye
calls out your name
Scratching, enraging,
showing all my pain.
My sharpie lullabye
faces the demons I won't show
with a fear I've always know
I'm letting you go

Verse B
Wiping tears away from my eyes,
I'm lost in a lie that you've spread
Tangled, I can't break free
But somehow,
I'll find a way.
I always do.

Song Formation:
Verse A
Chorus
Verse B
Chorus
Break
Chorus

i have another version of sharpie lullabye, but its kinda...personal. you guys understand right?