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Story Or Series Title: LMMNA is our name yo
Fandom: Death Note
Culprit Author's Name: Maoh Sakura
Full Name (plus titles if any): Annik
Full Species(es): everyone-convenient-loves-her!Sue
Hair Color (include adjectives): n/a?
Eye Color (include adjectives): n/a?
Unusual Markings/Colorations: n/a?
Special Possessions (if any): a black cape she wears all the time over her normal clothing because "my mother made it for me before she died."
Annoying Origin: n/a
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Every canon character loves her. In the first chapter is Near's protector and Matt is jealous of the attention Mello gives her; all three hang out with her everywhere. In the second chapter, L is her "big brother," dotes on her and comes to some huge birthday party for her at Wammy's House, and enlists her as his "assistant" in the Kira investigation.
Annoying Special Abilities: "special ablity of calming people with my voice and words"; by "typing furiously" she amazes "everyone besides L" in the Kira investigation with her "typing skills and knowlege."
Other Annoying Traits: randomly yelling for no reason; making everything center around her.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
"There you are A,"L said smiling and pulling me into the center of the room where four older men, a girl and boy around L's age were standing or sitting in a couch.
"This is the girl! She's so small, I thought she would be older then what are you sweetheart six?"the blonde girl said looking at me as the older men looked me over.
"I assure you Misa Misa A is quiet mature for her age, and her intelagence matches some of the highest records for high schoolers,"L said smiling at me.
"And I'm not six!"I huffed looking at the blonde bimbo.
"You really think she can help?"the young boy said looking at me.
"Yes A has been following the case quiet well," L instead patting my head.
"Well we're glad to have you on the team A!" one of the older men said hugging me.
I tried pulling away biting his shoulder. "AAWWW!!" the man yelled dropping me on the couch.
"I should have warned you Matsuda A hates being hugged or picked up,"L said picking up a sugar cube and licking the sides of it.
"Mogi, Shoichiro, Matsuda, (I got this off of Wiki!), Misa Misa, Light,"L said pointing each out to me ", please say hello to A, my little helper from now on."
"Now Light please give me the hand cuffs I left you,"L said as he took the hand cuffs and put one on himself the other on Light.
"Why are you?"I started as L began over me.
"Its a little know fact but Light here was tooken in along with Misa here with the intetnion that both of them were kira or still are,"L said finshing one sugar cube and going on to the next.
"Oh alright so lets get down to bussiness shall we," I said sliding into a chair infront of a computer.
I started typing furiously with the everyone besides L looking in amazment at the screen and my typing skills and knowlege. L was use to my skills on a computer and it was a well know fact I could even hack the computers at the Whammy house. I spent about three hours on the computer before I turned to them finally. "People!"I shouted to get there attetion.
"Yes Miss A?" Matsuda asked staying back from me abit.
"I'm starving can we get food!"I stated looking at them.
"Oh yes I forgot you eat in normal time periods,"L said getting up from his chair.
"No no L sit down! Misa will take A for lunch as a girls lunch sorry but no boys Light dearest!" Misa said pulling my hand.
"Alright!" I said being dragged along after her.
Later chapters get worse and more self-serving...I could barely skim through this mess by chapter Five, so I'm not sure if I'm missing anything or what.
Fandom: Death Note
Culprit Author's Name: Maoh Sakura
Full Name (plus titles if any): Annik
Full Species(es): everyone-convenient-loves-her!Sue
Hair Color (include adjectives): n/a?
Eye Color (include adjectives): n/a?
Unusual Markings/Colorations: n/a?
Special Possessions (if any): a black cape she wears all the time over her normal clothing because "my mother made it for me before she died."
Annoying Origin: n/a
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Every canon character loves her. In the first chapter is Near's protector and Matt is jealous of the attention Mello gives her; all three hang out with her everywhere. In the second chapter, L is her "big brother," dotes on her and comes to some huge birthday party for her at Wammy's House, and enlists her as his "assistant" in the Kira investigation.
Annoying Special Abilities: "special ablity of calming people with my voice and words"; by "typing furiously" she amazes "everyone besides L" in the Kira investigation with her "typing skills and knowlege."
Other Annoying Traits: randomly yelling for no reason; making everything center around her.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
"There you are A,"L said smiling and pulling me into the center of the room where four older men, a girl and boy around L's age were standing or sitting in a couch.
"This is the girl! She's so small, I thought she would be older then what are you sweetheart six?"the blonde girl said looking at me as the older men looked me over.
"I assure you Misa Misa A is quiet mature for her age, and her intelagence matches some of the highest records for high schoolers,"L said smiling at me.
"And I'm not six!"I huffed looking at the blonde bimbo.
"You really think she can help?"the young boy said looking at me.
"Yes A has been following the case quiet well," L instead patting my head.
"Well we're glad to have you on the team A!" one of the older men said hugging me.
I tried pulling away biting his shoulder. "AAWWW!!" the man yelled dropping me on the couch.
"I should have warned you Matsuda A hates being hugged or picked up,"L said picking up a sugar cube and licking the sides of it.
"Mogi, Shoichiro, Matsuda, (I got this off of Wiki!), Misa Misa, Light,"L said pointing each out to me ", please say hello to A, my little helper from now on."
"Now Light please give me the hand cuffs I left you,"L said as he took the hand cuffs and put one on himself the other on Light.
"Why are you?"I started as L began over me.
"Its a little know fact but Light here was tooken in along with Misa here with the intetnion that both of them were kira or still are,"L said finshing one sugar cube and going on to the next.
"Oh alright so lets get down to bussiness shall we," I said sliding into a chair infront of a computer.
I started typing furiously with the everyone besides L looking in amazment at the screen and my typing skills and knowlege. L was use to my skills on a computer and it was a well know fact I could even hack the computers at the Whammy house. I spent about three hours on the computer before I turned to them finally. "People!"I shouted to get there attetion.
"Yes Miss A?" Matsuda asked staying back from me abit.
"I'm starving can we get food!"I stated looking at them.
"Oh yes I forgot you eat in normal time periods,"L said getting up from his chair.
"No no L sit down! Misa will take A for lunch as a girls lunch sorry but no boys Light dearest!" Misa said pulling my hand.
"Alright!" I said being dragged along after her.
Later chapters get worse and more self-serving...I could barely skim through this mess by chapter Five, so I'm not sure if I'm missing anything or what.