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Week #23 - School

Sep 04, 2008 21:38

[Title] And Now Life Really Begins ( Read more... )

Comments 14

lycoris September 4 2008, 21:03:15 UTC

Oh, this was lovely. I loved all the different feelings all done. Misa's was lovely, so was Matsuda's - I had such sympathy with that! His confusion works so very well, it's just so sweet. Raito's was just the right side of being slightly creepy. And Mikami's was so sad. I really loved how they all fitted together, this was really, REALLY good.

elisabell_angel September 4 2008, 23:04:14 UTC

This was fantastic... I really loved Mikami and Misa's reaction, this was amazing 0_0.... Great job!

versipellis September 5 2008, 18:03:08 UTC

Thank you! :D

fox_in_exile September 5 2008, 01:33:06 UTC

Yay! Someone else who knows Yamamoto exists!

This was really awesome, I loved the repitition of 'all the girls are crying' and the different feelings that they all have towards the moment of graduation. And while I loved all of it, in particular I adored Matsuda's because that's so what you feel- or maybe what I did at least :D

versipellis September 5 2008, 18:02:47 UTC

I was rereading Book 2 and picked up on him this time ^^

Wow, thank you very much! I'm glad you liked Matsuda's - I've definitely felt that way about work, I know that much!

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versipellis September 5 2008, 18:01:50 UTC

I am glad I inadvertently provided you with a fangirl moment! *bows*

Thanks very much! I have somewhat ambivalent feelings towards my own graduation and I also think it often feels like a pretty weird occasion, so... yeah ^^ I'm glad you liked it!

spagyric September 5 2008, 17:38:25 UTC

Brilliant! They were all perfectly in character and the way you set it out really worked. Well done! :)

versipellis September 5 2008, 18:00:32 UTC

Thanks! :D