Week #1 - Ms. Mikami

[viola_canina]

Title: Sketches
Rating: Not higher than PG?
Characters: Teru Mikami and Kiyomi Takada. And Teru's mom. In a sense. WHY, YES, I'M PREDICTABLE. >o<
Warnings: None, really.
Word Count: 325

Comments

[versipellis]

I really like Mikami's lack of a sense of humour, and awkwardness - it feels very IC to me.

[viola_canina]

Thank you! He just... strikes me as someone who doesn't really have a sense of humor. x3

[versipellis]

Yeah, definitely XD

[speaky_bean]

Yay, this is the first entry so far on this comm! That means that my fear that no one would post anything cannot come true, because we at least have one entry! And it's an excellent entry, too. I kind of knew you were going to get Kiyomi/Teru out of this somehow...XD; Thanks a ton for posting!

Onto the actual fic, it was lovely. I loved how Teru completely missed the point of almost everything Kiyomi was saying. And the writing-down-names thing is something most people do with their first crushes in middle school, but oddly enough, it fit! And it was adorable. And the bit about his mother and the drawings are so cute! Over all, great job.

[viola_canina]

I can get Teru x Kiyomi out of anything. xDDD;;; Thank you! Yes, he's... good at missing the point of... stuff... xD;;; I mean, look at his crazy religion. He based it on accidents and such things. xD;;;

[speaky_bean]

XD; Perhaps it will be my personal mission to make a prompt that you CAN'T get Teru/Kiyomi out of...

[katiekun]

Man, I love the pairing Mikami/Takada. I read a few of them on Fanfiction.net once, and I loved it!

You write them very well, and they're in character (especially Mikami).

Congratulations on posting the first story entry in the community! And the way you used the prompt was creative. =D

[viola_canina]

I love this pairing, too. *o* Thank you!

[lycoris]

Oh, that's rather adorable. I love the bit about Mikami's mother and his remark about her being horribly subjective. I like it.

[viola_canina]

Thank you very much!

[faustian_angel7]

That is a nice pairing. ^^ Totally in character, and a very sweet fic overall.

[viola_canina]

Thanks a lot! ^_^