I'm trying to stay awake here

Mar 13, 2006 19:38

Plus, some of you asked. If you don't get it, it's ok. ^^

And just because I put it up doesn't mean it's all right to steal! You steal you die! And your corpse gets sodomized! >__<



PAGE 1
(demon facing boy - flashback)
demon: Hey, I've got something for you to do.
(boy's leg walking - present time)
demon: There's no rush, so you can take your time.
(man lighting a cigarette)

PAGE 2
(full page, boy looking at man sitting on bench as man lights cigarette)
demon: "you just gotta go kill off an angel."
(title at bottom panel, should prolly think of something)

PAGE 3
(boy still standing and waiting for man, a few people minding their own business in the area)
man/angel: *mutters* I swear, they get younger by the minute...
(boy still standing, waiting patiently)
angel: *exhales cigarette smoke* Take a seat, let an old man finish his last cigarette.
(boy plops himself beside the angel, arms resting on the backrest)

PAGE 4
angel: *puts cig back in mouth* So, why'd you take the job?
boy: (side view of his face) I just wanted to see what a dead angel looked like.
(wide shot, angel going O___o and boy going ^__^)
(close-up, angel still going O___o)
(close-up, boy still going ^__^)
(bottom panel with black lining, two undefined people sitting at a table far away)

PAGE 5
angel: *looking a little amused* Well, that's a new one.
(low-angle shot of boy looking straight at surroundings, with a small musical note)
boy: So, how'd you become an angel?
(small panel of side view of angel's eyes looking downcast)
(grey scene showing a dead angel at someone's feet - flashback)
(cigarette stub falls to the floor - present time)
angel: ...They had a vacancy, so I took it up.
boy: Ahh.

PAGE 6
(boy has a creepy grin)
boy: So you killed another angel for it?
angel: *trying not to look at the boy* ...You could put it that way.
(boy reaching for something in his jacket/ under his shirt)
boy: That makes you a sinner, no?
(angel sharply turns to look at the boy, a shocked expression in his eyes)
(long shot, both angel and boy jump away from the bench. Angel crouches towards the ground with his wings spread out and a sword drawn, boy leaps upwards while shooting bench, loud BANG sound or something)

PAGE 7
(page split into three vertical panels, boy's insane glee on right, angel's struggling expression on left, big black bar for text in middle.)
text clearly belonging to boy: AND ALL SINNERS SHOULD DIE.

PAGE 8
(black lined panel with teaparty couple of the demon in the first page and bunnychan as Shinku...just kidding...wait, calm down, put away that knife...)
(alternating panels of boy and angel in XTREME! BATTLING! ACTION!)
(teacup brought to girl's mouth)
girl: You sent a human boy for your dirty work?
(demon resting back on chair, fingers interlocked - why do I make it so hard for meself?)
demon: You do realise he's no ordinary boy, though.

PAGE 9
(still more fighting dadadada dadadada da dadadada...)
(girl places cup down)
girl: No good can come from the self-righteous.
(angel slashes at boy, who somersaults over him)
(girl's frowning face)
girl: Just you see.
(demon's confident relaxed smile)
(boy points gun at the back of angel's head while somersaulting from awkward angle - I REALLY like to make me suffer =_=)

PAGE 10
(horizontal panels dividing the page)
(boy pointing gun with more insane glee)
(inset panel pulling trigger)
(angel turning around with OH SNAP look)
(large panel of blackness...and white splotches?)

PAGE 11
(raining park)
(demon's shoes, hands in pockets, side profile in three separate interlocking insets)
(demon's shoe, one of these weird angles where there's more ground and horizon and the back of the boy's head is shown)
(small inset of demon smile)
(larger panel, demon's angelic wings unfurl -SHOKKU!-, boy standing in front of big pool of blood / body?)
demon: You did a fine job indeed.

PAGE 12
boy: You want his position so badly, yet you won't do it yourself?
(boy turning)
(see boy's crazy smile, see boy's crazy gun in your face, see demon going uh oh O_O;;; )
boy: You still murdered him, and that's a grave sin, you know.
(side panel of shadow boy pointing gun at shadow demon's head)
boy: And all sinners should die.
(rest of page filled with happy black)

END at bottom center.

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