On the Third Day of Christmas by xbitexmyxlipx [Rated PG-13]

[ferretbush_post]

Celebrate the Season fic request for Jessica/lelly_icecreamy

Title: On the Third Day of Christmas
AuthorL: xbitexmyxlipx
Rating: PG-13 for a little swearing
Disclaimer: JKR owns all.
Author's Notes: Completely AU from HBP. Possibly. I guess really, it depends on how the final book turns out and how many conspiracy theories were correct. I got as close to "romance" as I could

Comments

[innocenteen]

The spacing is funny. You really should do something about it. It's hard to read.

Nevertheless, it was cute! The atmosphere was down pat! I loved the pics!

[allthingsgood]

The spacing is fine to me? :D (I'm not the writer, btw)

[innocenteen]

The spacing is fine for me too, but maybe the mods fixed it before I looked.

Thank you very much. :D

[lelly_icecreamy]

Oh, wow.
That was lovely! Not quite what I'd expected, but I'm happy it wasn't - the way you portrayed Draco's character was simply charming (was there a particular reason?).
Thank you for squeezing in the swallow bit, too - I seem to have a sudden fondness for them, and wondered how others would squeeze them into a Christmas piece.

The links for the pictures were great, by the way. It's always easier, when visualizing, to know just what it is you're visualizing.

Hermione's 'Slytherin Fanclub', as you put it, was remarkable as well. Ooh, I'm so happy you wrote for me =) I couldn't have asked for anything better.
This is definitely going into my Memories.

[lelly_icecreamy]

*Cringes a little* Now I feel bad, but I'm glad you like the alternative. :D
A reason? *Guesses* Hol...iday cheer? I think it might be a writing quirk he brings out. :P

I admit I had a bit of trouble thinking of a way to include swallows. (One low point was having it as one of those display birds that some people keep on their desks and having it startle someone...I'm not proud that I almost went with it. :p)

I'm very glad I got your request, and it's always nice to write for someone who appreciates it. :D

(Happy Holidays!)

[red_erythros]

That was absolutely cute. I feel quite happy that I've taken the time to read this! Draco's absolutely charming, and I found it so cute about the truth behind the jewelry shopping. :D

[red_erythros]

Heh! Thank you! :D
I'm a somewhat firm believer in fluffy/happy fics around Christmas. - It just feels wrong otherwise. :P

[wuway]

What pics?

[xbitexmyxlipx]

They took out the other AN. *Shrugs*
Hogwarts star, pretty necklace, sucky shrapnel star, Granger's star, jacket.

Thanx

[wuway]

Checking them now.