Black & Blue [PG-13] for savage_midnight

Oct 28, 2008 19:15

Title: Black & Blue
Author/Artist: pokeystar
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Harry Potter? The Counting Crows? Shakespeare? Not owning, only borrowing. And putting back, right away.
Warnings: I can't. It would ruin the surprise.
Summary: There are more things in heaven and earth, Horatio,
Than are dreamt of in your philosophy.
Notes: Dear savage_midnight, I know you ( Read more... )

exchange: shine a light

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bambu345 October 28 2008, 20:01:05 UTC
Even after we discussed it, I wondered if I would recognize your piece, but I did fairly early on. It's still noticeably your work.

It's heartbreaking and bittersweet, and really well done!

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bambu345 October 29 2008, 17:27:41 UTC
This means a lot, coming from you. Especially since you know how anxious I was about it.

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hathorx October 28 2008, 21:55:06 UTC
Great story! I loved how all the short scenes were put together - brilliantly written!

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hathorx October 29 2008, 17:28:34 UTC
I am blushing and I thank you.

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desdiamonds October 28 2008, 23:20:11 UTC
This was fantastic!!!

Just, WOW. The story is heartbreaking and beautiful and just amazing!

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desdiamonds October 29 2008, 17:29:26 UTC
Thank you.

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hoochiehooligan October 28 2008, 23:49:59 UTC
the idea of draco being there but not really, confused me and to be honest io'm still a little unsure as to whether he's still alive since both kitty and hermione can still see him but with what kitty said to him.. hmm i'll have to go back and reread haha.

"As her arms came up to rest against the prominent swell, cradling it protectively, proudly, the words of the Dark Mark translation swarmed before his eyes, and reformed slightly.

Natus ē virō. Born from man."

ohhh and that just gives me chills. all over! and without finding draco's reasearch, hermione will never know until it's too late! ah
soo.. i think this calls for a .. sequel!! hahaha yes yes yes :)

this was a great story! i love your writing.

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hoochiehooligan October 29 2008, 17:31:22 UTC
Not alive, sorry. A ghost. But he didn't know that (for sure) until the end, either.

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kazfeist October 29 2008, 03:23:25 UTC
Wow! A really unique piece! You're right in saying that Shyamalan inspired you! Thanks so much for writing this. :D

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kazfeist October 29 2008, 17:32:19 UTC
You are very welcome. Thank you for reading.

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