Title: Madness
Author/Artist:
rosweldrmrRating: K+
Disclaimer: Harry Potter © J.K. Rowling // Quote: "There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness." -Friedrich Nietzsche
Warnings: first person, present tense
Summary: Even as much as she loves order and structure, there's still a part of her that's trying to prove she
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Er, though maybe we could get a teensy glimpse of why she chooses to be with Draco even if she's with Ron (if it IS Ron) or why she can't leave Ron when she's evidently in love with Draco? Just a thought. :)
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I appriciate the review, and the suggestions.
I'm glad you liked it, especially the style. :)
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And you liked how I used the quote. I was quite nervous about it, actually.
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I can't tell you how much I appriciate your comments.
And that you liked Draco's voice. I didn't know if first person POV would work. So, I'm very glad you liked it.
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That's just about the last thing I'd think to compare my writing to. So thank you. It's very flattering.
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I realize now, there are things that I should have changed or fleshed out more... but at the time I was so pressed.
Thank you for reviewing, and calling it 'Lyrical'. Thank you.
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