Banana Pancakes [PG-13] for punchycat

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Title: Banana Pancakes
Author: sunnyjune46
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I possess not the Potter known as Harry, that privilege belongs to JK Rowling. Nor do I possess the song henceforth known as “Banana Pancakes”, the honour of which belongs to Jack Johnson. Nor do I own any rights to ‘The Tempest’ which solely belongs to Billy Shakespeare.
Warnings: Excessive

Comments

[mgleteacher]

Wow...lots of dialogue. I'm going to be honest and say that I ended up skipping a lot of the story because dialogue!only fics aren't my cup of tea. However, you have Hermione spot on. Draco is a bit OOC but I love your lines there. You definitely have a couple that are just killer like:

I really must fancy you or something to be thinking of your welfare above my own. It’s not a familiar habit

Good work! XD

[sunnyjune46]

Phew, I finally get to reply to these things! I'm glad you gave my story a chance and that you enjoyed some of the lines. Thanks for reading/reviewing!

[punchycat]

Aaaah, I loved this! :D Thank you so much, author! Their interactions were great, the conversation was humorous and flowed very nicely, the plot was wonderful.. I adored everything! I laughed out loud several times, and I'm sure my sister thinks I'm mental right about now.

I thought the description of Hermione's dream date was spot on-- just the sort of thing a bookworm like her would want. (It didn't sound too bad to me, either!)

The incorporation of the song and The Tempest were very nicely done. I was pleasantly surprised when I saw that you not only used my request, but also some good ol' Billy Shakespeare!

which makes my case that all Muggles are mental, and I wanted to make sure you weren’t sitting at home on a box of Krispy Kremes.” Ahahaha, one of the best lines. I had a very good laugh at Draco and his ignorance of the Muggle world.

Like Draco said, I probably sound like a blithering idiot right about now, so I'll end my ramblings here with another THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH. I could not have asked for anything better! :D

[sunnyjune46]

I am SO glad I finally get to respond to this. I always agonize over my prompts because I want so much to meet the recipient's expectations but still manage to stay within my weird style of writing. I'm very happy that you enjoyed what I did here. I'm glad you liked the Shakespeare stuff -- I wasn't sure if it would go over well/right or not, but if you liked it, then that's enough validation for me. :-) Cheers!

[pokeystar]

I really liked this. Very very much, even though the ending seemed a tad rushed.(Just can't see her hopping into bed with him right off especially with that Tempest quote in mind).

[sunnyjune46]

It is a bit rushed at the end, but what we don't get to see is Hermione's thoughts from the whole day (maybe I'll do a companion piece someday) and in her mind, she's basically thinking: "Ohmigod, stuck in a dark box with hottie-hottie-Draco, hyperventilate, hyperventilate, jump his bones when I can" or something like that. lol ;-) Thanks for enjoying it!

[sunnyjune46]

I'm glad you enjoyed my version of the ever-enjoyable "stuck together" plot. :-) Thanks so much for finding the story witty - I do my best and hope people get it; it's so rewarding when everyone else gets the humor as well! Thanks!

[marmaladefever]

Unfortunately, I caught your name as well. X_x

I love dialogue. I love banter. Is there really more to be said?

[sunnyjune46]

Me too! Banter makes my day. So glad you enjoyed the story my dear! :-)