FC1 - "WHiPs", SlytherinsWench

Oct 06, 2006 04:10

Title: WHiPs
Author:SlytherinsWench
SlytherinsWench
Rating: R for loads of innuendo
Warnings: A bit fluffy, with a light, smutty frosting.
Author's Notes: Thanks to SJ for her quick advice!
Summary: Wizarding Highway Patrol + 1 Officer Malfoy + 1 speeding Hermione Granger… Can you say, “search me officer?” I know I can!

WHiPs )

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kytus333 October 6 2006, 14:21:26 UTC
Hey, this was funny and sexy at the same time.

How did you do that?!?!?

LOL.

Loved Malfoy and his WHiPs uniform. YUM!!!

Kylie x

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slytherinswench October 7 2006, 04:20:09 UTC
Thanks! I was worried that I didn't do him justice. Glad you liked it!

And funny/sexy, well that's just a blast to write.

Thanks again!

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lilycat81 October 6 2006, 23:17:24 UTC
EEEE! This is wonderful Sara! Great job!

I love how you came up with such a novel plotline and turned into something so fabulous! The WHiPs! Honestly - who wouldn't get the flutters at the prospect of discipline at the hands of Officer Malfoy?

And the little touches of humor here and there - mostly in the characters' inner monologues - are just wonderful. I'm so glad I found this! I clicked the link on a lark to see if anything looked interesting and, lo and behold, I found this. Yaye!

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Re: WHiPs slytherinswench October 7 2006, 04:29:39 UTC
I wasn't sure if I would get it done in time, it really wanted to be much longer.

I know, right? Malfoy with handcuffs and that uniform? *fans self*

Thanks, Cat!

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WHiPs slytherinswench October 7 2006, 04:30:24 UTC
Thanks!!! Glad you liked it.:)

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classicalibi October 7 2006, 16:58:24 UTC
I loved this story, from beginning to end.
It's very unique and very charming.

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slytherinswench October 7 2006, 19:47:38 UTC
Thanks! It was a blast to write. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it as much as I did! :)

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classicalibi October 8 2006, 20:25:42 UTC
How could one not love this story? What with Malfoy clad in skin-tight microfiber.

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slytherinswench October 8 2006, 20:28:47 UTC
LOL, yeah... the plotbunny started whispering about the rear mirror view and well, who could resist?

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LOVED IT! sayyida_jaida October 8 2006, 17:28:39 UTC
Sara,

This was fab! Totally loved it! ANd the ending... soooo sweet! Good for Draco...

sayyida

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Re: LOVED IT! slytherinswench October 8 2006, 20:08:45 UTC
YAY! Thanks! I'm glad it didn't turn out too sugary, I mean, you know me. I'm usually all about the pr0n... :)

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Re: LOVED IT! sayyida_jaida October 8 2006, 20:11:58 UTC
lol, yes, you are...

I hope you can read mine when you get a chance. I'd love to hear what you think...

sayyida

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Re: LOVED IT! slytherinswench October 8 2006, 20:26:36 UTC
I'm there! Hey, you know sometimes I get caught up in my crap and you have to point me in the direction of new ficcage. I'm always up to read you, doll.

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