Not Clark, 2 of 2

[dm_wyatt]

Thanks go to tragicllyhip for the hand-holding!

Title: Not Clark

Author: DM Wyatt

Pairing: Superman/Lois

Warnings: Adult, NC-17, future-fic

Spoilers: None

Summary: Lois is at home alone on a Saturday night and Superman makes an unexpected visit

Word Count: 9858

2 of 2

Previous entry here....

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"What?" She was shocked and scared. Lois tried to turn around again but

Comments

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Oh, I really liked that! This was so well done and it totally made my Clois loving heart skip a beat.

I like Lois doubting her relationship with Clark because it was realistic. Though I love them happy together, this was definitely a different twist that I found myself enjoying.

Superman arriving and making her pick was perfect. When Lois was reflecting on Clark, I was giddy. I had a feeling she would pick Clark but when it happened, it made me smile.

The big revelation was done marvelously! And the sex scene was perfect.

My favorite part was the emotions. The descriptions were so REAL, that I could feel it too.

Beautiful work!

[dm_wyatt]

*grins*

I'm so glad you liked it!

I was worried my first foray into Clois was a complete bust. I mean, not a single comment all day...

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment!

*hugs*

[dm_wyatt]

*grins*

I had fun writing Lois, so maybe it's not out of the realm of possibility for me to write Clois again but I'd have to get another good idea like this one...

[enderwiggin24]

I love the way , you have describe lois thoughts here!

[dm_wyatt]

Thanks!

*hugs*

Re: Finally, ppens the bottle of wine...

[dm_wyatt]

Uh...

Well, I don't see Clark as being whiny here... he had tears in his eyes because she made him the happiest man alive by choosing Clark, not because he was whining or feeling sorry for himself.

I mean, think about it. It was a very hard thing for him to ask her to choose, that's why he had to go to her as Superman and not Clark. He held the emotions in until she chose and he could finally be himself with her, truly be himself for the first time in his life.

I think that even the most masculine of men might tear up with all that going on...

*shrug*

At least that was my thinking on it. I'm glad that overall you enjoyed it and it was worth the wait.

Re: Finally, ppens the bottle of wine...

[dm_wyatt]

When it comes to the dual-identity thing, I think a lot of people like to pick sides. Either Clark is the real man and Superman is just what he can do; or Superman is the real man and Clark Kent is the disguise

[adja999]

Aw, that was really cute and hot at the same time. You said it took a while for you to write it, well... It was worth the wait.

[dm_wyatt]

Thanks for the nice comments!

I'm so glad you thought it was worth the wait...

I struggled a bit with the end and finding time to write, so I'm glad it worked out.