The Bright Light Object

[dj_genesis]

Once upon a time in a land not so far from here there was a man who was searching. What he was searching for, he did not know, all he knew is that he must find that thing. His eyes were blinded by the sun and his skin torn in places from different instances of great suffering, but deep inside, he still held on to the idea that there was something

Comments

[lupine_gift]

Well written, Darren. I thoroughly enjoyed that.

[dj_genesis]

well danke. I've been trying to focus mroe on my writing lately. It's something that I've let go lax and I really need to keep it going. I know it's still a very a-typical story, but most stories today follow a basic structure and are all in some way a revised version of an already classic standard. but it's still good to take the time to write within those boundaries to see if you canbring new light ot an already known story structure.